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once upon a time-peace a sigh-lent whisssh's four times for-tunes like the muse-hics and their radios stay-shuns like spirits in a glass without the rum-bull stan sand

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/10/2024 8:33:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sand Blown
Date: 4/11/2024 2:05:00 PM

...thanks for the comment-ting!....but spiritual-alley wise i'm in good shape.....have a very nice day......stan