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On Winds of Desire

my voice sings love songs
  wending on winds of desire ~
    when will it arrive

lovesenryu

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/21/2021 10:11:00 AM

Your "on winds of desire" is a wonderful story in just three lines. It will arrive when you are not looking. Have a Blessed Christmas.................

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/13/2021 5:18:00 PM

Enjoy the peace and quiet of freedom

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/13/2021 7:12:00 PM

I am. Petty people don’t bother me.

Nkoyo Nsa

Date: 12/11/2021 7:27:00 AM

Cute Just as you

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2021 10:45:00 AM

Well, thank you, Nkoyo.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2021 5:22:00 AM

If the voice is singing love songs, it hears the whispers nearby. Much goodwill to you Jenna. Ask the winds if the paradise is just around the bend where they came from.

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/9/2021 6:20:00 AM

aw thanks, Vijay. I think a different kind of paradise is nearer.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/9/2021 4:46:00 AM

You'll know its arrived Jenna, when the winds of desire sweep you off your feet. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/9/2021 6:19:00 AM

Cupid can keep his arrows for a while longer, Tom. I'm enjoying my alone time... and you're already taken. ;)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/8/2021 10:56:00 PM

Be patient. Love strikes at the opportune moment. ~~

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/9/2021 4:14:00 AM

Love struck me a blow once. That was enough. Thanks for your thoughts, Victor.

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/8/2021 3:11:00 PM

I think your dreamy senryu may only be answered by itself Jenna, it’s impossible just to make it happen, but hey, that should never stop you searching, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/9/2021 4:13:00 AM

I'm not searching for another heartache, David. I like being alone, for now. Thanks so much for your sweet thoughts.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/8/2021 2:15:00 PM

I don't know, Jenna, the answer to your question, but I do know that when it arrives you will know it with convincing certainty. And, sometimes it shows up so unexpectedly you are pleasantly shocked! Good writing!

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/9/2021 4:12:00 AM

It's not really a question, Milt. More like a thought. I'm not eager to get back on that train. Thanks for your concern.