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On Winds of Desire

my voice sings love songs
  wending on winds of desire ~
    when will it arrive

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Paula Goldsmith

December 21, 2021 at 10:11 AM

Your "on winds of desire" is a wonderful story in just three lines. It will arrive when you are not looking. Have a Blessed Christmas.................

Mark Koplin

December 13, 2021 at 5:18 PM

Enjoy the peace and quiet of freedom

Jenna Logan

December 13, 2021 at 7:12 PM

I am. Petty people don’t bother me.

Nkoyo Nsa

December 11, 2021 at 7:27 AM

Cute Just as you

Jenna Logan

December 12, 2021 at 10:45 AM

Well, thank you, Nkoyo.

Vijay Pandit

December 9, 2021 at 5:22 AM

If the voice is singing love songs, it hears the whispers nearby. Much goodwill to you Jenna. Ask the winds if the paradise is just around the bend where they came from.

Jenna Logan

December 9, 2021 at 6:20 AM

aw thanks, Vijay. I think a different kind of paradise is nearer.

Tom Cunningham

December 9, 2021 at 4:46 AM

You'll know its arrived Jenna, when the winds of desire sweep you off your feet. Tom

Jenna Logan

December 9, 2021 at 6:19 AM

Cupid can keep his arrows for a while longer, Tom. I'm enjoying my alone time... and you're already taken. ;)

Victor Buhagiar

December 8, 2021 at 10:56 PM

Be patient. Love strikes at the opportune moment. ~~

Jenna Logan

December 9, 2021 at 4:14 AM

Love struck me a blow once. That was enough. Thanks for your thoughts, Victor.

David Kavanagh

December 8, 2021 at 3:11 PM

I think your dreamy senryu may only be answered by itself Jenna, it’s impossible just to make it happen, but hey, that should never stop you searching, cheers David

Jenna Logan

December 9, 2021 at 4:13 AM

I'm not searching for another heartache, David. I like being alone, for now. Thanks so much for your sweet thoughts.

L Milton Hankins

December 8, 2021 at 2:15 PM

I don't know, Jenna, the answer to your question, but I do know that when it arrives you will know it with convincing certainty. And, sometimes it shows up so unexpectedly you are pleasantly shocked! Good writing!

Jenna Logan

December 9, 2021 at 4:12 AM

It's not really a question, Milt. More like a thought. I'm not eager to get back on that train. Thanks for your concern.