On Way to Moose Wyoming

skinny and tall pines Holy Spirit’s breath winds ‘round steeples in forest
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Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:20 AM
Way to go, Kim, with this one. I can see a moose trying to hide behind a pine tree. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 6:10 AM
Thank you, Sara! Glad you saw a moose within the imagery!
Hind Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:59 PM
a beautiful poem, Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 10:08 PM
Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 8:37 PM
God's country...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:29 PM
Yes, it is and at times overwhelming!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 4:28 PM
how breathtaking and well crafted. hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 3:10 PM
Very interesting read dear lovely Kim! Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:29 PM
Thank you!
Rolland Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:25 PM
wonderful haiku, Wyoming is still in my souvenirs, thanks poet
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:30 PM
Wyoming is a nice place to be,
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:22 PM
I love the last line the most. So unique! And beautiful how youv painted imagery! Creative haiku dear Kim. Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:30 PM
I appreciate you, Ink! Thank you!
Winter Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 8:02 AM
This is a beautifully written poem. Truly. Best, Anne
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:31 PM
Thank you, Anne!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 5:31 AM
In such a short poem, you get the essence of God's peace.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:31 PM
Thank you so much!
DiMino Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:11 AM
I once loved to drive...not so much anymore. Especially loved driving at night, in a quiet drizzle when all the city streets were settling, and one got a whiff of something other than hustle and bustle -- insane competition.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:33 PM
We find that the things we get in the habit of doing must change. I went from kneeling in prayer, to pacing, then it hurt to walk…doing better now but must figure things out once again….bless you
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