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On W H Hunt's 'Our English Coasts'

'Strayed Sheep' Contest Judged: 12/20/2024 ---------------------------------------------------- I stare at the English coast where a flock of sheep graze and laze on breezy summer day To risk for every flower, bramble and blade of grass for them is sweeter than sweet hay Marked and blessed flock of sheep feels no danger, fears none, and has sure-footed take The green moss on weathered rock cushions beckon some to ruminating break Horizontal ears read, there is no surprise or fear, the flock is safe, happy, calm and gay The herd knows the herder - they never stray, the herder knows that the herd will never stray Like one happy sheep I recline to enjoy the English coast, feel the sun and feel the breeze Blessed are the delicate hands that did such rich a blend; it holds my gaze, puts my mind at ease

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Date: 12/23/2024 2:23:00 PM
A nice, serene, happy poem
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/27/2024 5:12:00 AM
Thank you so much dear poet. Cheers!!!
Date: 12/19/2024 11:09:00 AM
I love how you blend the English country side with a flock of sheep, both are so calming ' Blessed are the delicate hands that did such rich a blend, it holds my gaze and puts my mind at ease.' I only read your last verse after I had written my comment. It seems we both had the same train of thought for a few brief minutes.. Pleased to meet you Thriveni C. Mysore. Blessings, Jennifer
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/22/2024 6:10:00 PM
I am thrilled by your kind visit dear poet. Pleasure to meet likewise. I am glad you like my write. I am grateful to you for the blessings dear poet, Thank you, you made my day. Cheers ~ Thriveni
Date: 12/16/2024 3:11:00 AM
Very beautiful analysis and a very powerful poem.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/16/2024 8:29:00 PM
Thank you dear poet for your visit and kind words. I am glad you liked it. Blessings & Cheers.

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