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On Vanity

wisdom in the dark
feigned resplendence floundering
vanity flattered!
 
July 3rd, 2018


Inspired by Demetrios Trifiatis Haiku "VANITY".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/15/2018 11:28:00 AM
Well written!! =)
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Date: 7/8/2018 4:06:00 PM
Beauty and wisdom are not the result of putting on a show; their roots are found in humble soil, Besma! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/8/2018 8:54:00 AM
Wisdom , depth and beauty in your fine creation her my friend! A great message to remind us all that we are fallen creatures , that have great promise if we but turn to the Light. A fav my friend, a true inspiration in such few words!
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Date: 7/7/2018 9:13:00 AM
Well expressed with such few words.
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Date: 7/7/2018 1:03:00 PM
My honour Richard! Thank you so much for your so appreciated praising feedback. Stay safe and blessed always.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:17:00 AM
Nice one, Besma!
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Date: 7/7/2018 1:01:00 PM
My pleasure dear Kim! Honoured by your visit and elated by your feedback. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.
Date: 7/6/2018 3:40:00 PM
Dearest Besma, you’ve amazed your ardent reader yet again.. Your inspired and admirable haiku shines a divine light on the useless arrogance of vanity. The keen edge of your poetry cuts through the darkness exposing feeble minded vanity for what it is; a phony state of mind swallowing its own humanity whole. Your poetic brilliance shines with thoughtful beauty and abundant meaning in your marvelous poem. Warmest wishes and love to you always my lovely friend. ~Susan
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Date: 7/7/2018 12:59:00 PM
An ardent reader as you are, a generous profound feedback the one you write, my pen bows and my words wow to your exquisite and amazing comment! You have poured too much beauty on my humble write and soul! I can't thank you enough for your warm and genuine feelings. My love and hugs dear Susan. Stay safe and blessed always.
Date: 7/6/2018 5:55:00 AM
A brilliant Haiku my dear friend and a definite fave for me. I see we have both become inspired by Demetrios 's Vanity, I am writing one too, and it should be ready by Sunday, I think? Love and Light to you.....Maria hugs
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Date: 7/7/2018 11:56:00 AM
We are interdependent dear Maria, we inspire and get inspired! Thank you so much dear for the Fave and for your precious feedback! Looking forward to reading your beauty! Love and hugs. Stay safe and blessed.
Date: 7/6/2018 4:58:00 AM
Your haiku brings light to the dark, truly wonderful Besma.. Harry
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Date: 7/7/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry for rewarding my humble write with your visit and uplifting feedback. Stay safe and blessed.
Date: 7/5/2018 8:51:00 AM
Great Haiku, Besma. T.J
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Date: 7/5/2018 3:46:00 PM
I'm honoured by your visit and delighted by your genuine praising! Thank you so much Teppo.. stay safe and blessed always.
Date: 7/4/2018 6:45:00 PM
An inspiration from an inspiration...your fermented words inspire, Besma...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:08:00 AM
I'm humbled and elated by your lovely feedback Winged Warrior! Always a great pleasure to read your generous comments on my humble write! Thank you so much! Stay safe.
Date: 7/4/2018 8:19:00 AM
- Yes, I noticed that you had been inspired by Demetrios in this Haiku ... Lovely written, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:56:00 AM
Indeed, it is my delight and honour.. thank you so much dear Anne-Lise for your generous appreciation! My pleasure. Stay blessed.
Date: 7/4/2018 7:13:00 AM
Lovely, Besma. Awesome.
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:41:00 AM
My immense pleasure Line! I do appreciate your visit and generous comment! Thank you so much. Stay safe and blessed.
Date: 7/4/2018 5:22:00 AM
My dearest friend, Besma, my Haiku " VANITY ' was honored as a POTD. Thank you for your support! Wish your Haiku be honored as well for it deserves it!
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:40:00 AM
A recognition well earned dear Demetrios.. We all look up to be honoured and given due appreciation for our work, but the acknowledgement given by ardent readers is also rewarding. I'm always honoured by your constant support and enlightening feedbacks.. stay blessed always.
Date: 7/3/2018 8:33:00 PM
A brilliant Haiku you have written here dearest , Besma! Certainly, a masterpiece in its own right!
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Date: 7/4/2018 2:34:00 AM
Your brilliant Haiku illuminated the path of inspiration ahead of me! I'm so grateful dear Demetrios. Always an honour to read your precious feedbacks on my page. Stay safe and blessed always.
Date: 7/3/2018 4:51:00 PM
Very deep.. precious words of wisdom, Besma.
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Date: 7/4/2018 2:26:00 AM
It is so generous of you dear Vijay to write such an appreciative and uplifting feedback! Always an immense pleasure to read your comments. Thank you so much! Stay safe and blessed always.
Date: 7/3/2018 4:25:00 PM
Vanity is a sign of insecurity..Great haiku Besma..
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Date: 7/4/2018 2:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One for your visit which I highly value and for your genuine praising to my write! My delight. Stay blessed always.