On Valentines Day

embraced in wonder
sparse snow hugs the bare branches...
nature defends life.

Oh the sun and moon
does create the silhouettes...
light in the shadows.

Come on hold me
with your magic touch
create heaven on earth?

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bateson Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 5:41 AM
We were married on Valentine's Day and it is special to me. Lovely poem
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:24 AM
And many congratulations again harry, I have missed a lot these last two days it will take me a while to catch up with things. xx
Gasun Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:31 PM
Congratulations my dear friend Harry for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
Roberts Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:14 PM
awesome entry Harry, congrats on your win
Chircop Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:14 PM
I love them all especially the second one..bravo Harry
May Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 7:27 PM
congrats on a great win Harry
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Harry congrats. I loved your poem. on nice
Hunter Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:57 PM
great haiku here harry...say that three times fast...Congrats on the win here!
Haick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Harry! Hope all is well!
A   Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:56 PM
HARRY, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:40 PM
WOWOWOW, what a special entry this is. The first one is outstanding, Harry and for me it is VERY haiku sounding!!! The others lend a wonderful magical touch to the idea of the whole set.
Gasun Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 8:33 AM
Outstanding piece and poem on this Heart's Day my dear friend, Harry! I like it so much from beginning to end! Congrats on this very creative and great Haiku. Well, have a very Happy Valentines Day to you and your love ones! love/hugs, Leonora
Poet Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Beautiful imagery in this haiku Harry!Lovely read.
Devnath  Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Nice appeal on Valentines Day which is glowing from your last line. Wonderfully done. Loved always, my friend, bl
Haick Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 4:15 PM
Beautiful vision to grasp, Harry. Tugs at the heart! You are so very good at saying what needs to be said in very few words. Excellent job! Always, Annalise
Trifiatis Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Dear Harry, An excellent piece of romantic poetry! Why the "?" wouldn't it be better "!"? Just teasing! Thank you! Hope ladies will enjoy it!
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 7:44 AM
aww, love this romantic write, jHarry
Veetil Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 12:16 AM
heaven on earth! enjoy the romance Harry, wonderful....
A   Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Harry, glad to feel the love, and magic in your poem.. love the passionate images... many will come on that day... An early Happy Valentines hug... xox~LINDA
Manassian Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Wow! Lovely imagery and romantic ending! Great work, Harry! Hugs!
Guzzi Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. [I've nudged Golie you nudge her now ;) ;)] Light & love
Joyce Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:13 PM
love the imagery ..lovely poem :)))
Harrell Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Ohh, so sweet. Perfect for Valentine's, Harry!
Moore Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 5:38 PM
As always, absolutely beautiful. I love them all. Very touching and full of emotion...xx Holly Moore
Haick Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 4:17 PM
You've created the scene, with the ambiance...great job, Harry. I enjoyed the Questionku ending! :Always, Annalise
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