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On Vacation

snapping photos sounds and aromas go - uncaptured

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/16/2025 4:59:00 PM
Andrea, this is funny. Hmmm...we need a machine to capture air samples to go with each photo. I guess this is why being there completes a much better experience.
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Date: 2/14/2025 9:23:00 AM
Ahhh!! If only we could capture the feel of those moments in time, but as long as memory holds out those snap shots or memory take us back to that place. Reads like a good contender if for a contest to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 2/14/2025 8:07:00 AM
Visionary!
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Date: 2/14/2025 1:10:00 AM
Congrats on your placement Andrea. Perfect description of what happens at times on vacation
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Date: 2/13/2025 9:13:00 PM
Brief but quite meaningful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/13/2025 8:12:00 PM
Inability to preserve the essence of a vacation.Yes,this happens often.Like the poem
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Date: 2/13/2025 11:33:00 AM
Isn’t that the truth. We have found no way to catch the true essence of a place. One must experience it for themselves. This is where God excels! And wait until heaven! Hugs!
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Date: 2/13/2025 9:55:00 AM
Lovely play on words ! <3
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Date: 2/13/2025 1:16:00 AM
beautiful, we need to rest, photography is cute, thanks poet
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Date: 2/12/2025 9:07:00 PM
This is a wonderful senryu. For some reason, it makes me think of a California beach.
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