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On Vacation

snapping photos 
        sounds and aromas
                    go   -    uncaptured

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Duke Beaufort

February 16, 2025 at 4:59 PM

Andrea, this is funny. Hmmm...we need a machine to capture air samples to go with each photo. I guess this is why being there completes a much better experience.

Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2025 at 9:23 AM

Ahhh!! If only we could capture the feel of those moments in time, but as long as memory holds out those snap shots or memory take us back to that place. Reads like a good contender if for a contest to me. Way to go. Sara K

Robert Warlov

February 14, 2025 at 8:07 AM

Visionary!

Oliver Mckeithan

February 14, 2025 at 1:10 AM

Congrats on your placement Andrea. Perfect description of what happens at times on vacation

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

February 13, 2025 at 9:13 PM

Brief but quite meaningful. Congrats on your win.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

February 13, 2025 at 8:12 PM

Inability to preserve the essence of a vacation.Yes,this happens often.Like the poem

Kim Rodrigues

February 13, 2025 at 11:33 AM

Isn’t that the truth. We have found no way to catch the true essence of a place. One must experience it for themselves. This is where God excels! And wait until heaven! Hugs!