On Troubled Shores - In Search of Nature

shrouded in the mist
brooding daughter of nature
beckons her lost child
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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George   Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Wonderful Haiku, Tim. The Typewriter is for a contest. In answer to your question - no, I didn't write a best seller - wishful thinking on my part. lol. Elaine
Mannan Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 10:48 PM
beckons her lost child, so lovely. Mant congrats Tim.
A   Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Tim, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda
Arowolo Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Lovely write,Tim...Congrats on your win...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:20 AM
many congratulations Tim xx
Babcock Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Nicely done Tim and my congrats on your win. love phyl
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 1:18 PM
Tim....wonderful....congratulations...
Bacha Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Congratulation Jim, excellent, and sad even for a fish to loose its child. warm to. Love Terry
Bono Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:12 PM
good luck.thanks for commenting on my poem for PD.as a grandma who went through it i know how she feels.but,it will be ok.take care
Richards Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:44 PM
This stirs up many different ideas in my mind!! Great job!
Horsman Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 3:54 PM
wow now that is some Haiku, really gets the imagination going...
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