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On Tranquil Lake

In the morning fog, nostalgia hovers On a lake of perfumy memories Bittersweet musings of bygone lovers Amidst waterlily territories Recollecting lovesome dreamy stories Subtle hush slicing on through waters still Receptive hereto a beckoning trill Distant recall of lingering romance Balmy breeze stirring the heart as it will A fleeting kiss of passing circumstance AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 3, 2018 for CONTEST NO. 475 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST and November 9, 2017 for contest EMPTY YOUR SOUL sponsored by BROKEN WINGS

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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/10/2018 1:18:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. A lovely poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/10/2018 2:32:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Susan.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/9/2018 9:14:00 PM
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Best wishes and congrats for your win in Brian's contest, Line - great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/9/2018 9:58:00 PM
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Thanks, Gregory. Most appreciated.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/7/2018 12:36:00 PM
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Lovely metaphor with the fog imagery Line. Congratulations on First Place honors! : )
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2018 4:45:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Connie, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 8/7/2018 7:07:00 AM
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Wonderful poem, congratulations on your win. Faux
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2018 7:13:00 AM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Faux.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/7/2018 2:34:00 AM
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A well written verse Line, congratulations on your win, love the fog over the lake image. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2018 7:05:00 AM
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Thank you, Tom. Most appreciated.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2018 3:41:00 PM
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Such lovely imagery, Line. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2018 3:43:00 PM
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Thank you, Sandra. Most appreciated.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 11/28/2017 7:50:00 AM
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This is very beautifully written with eloquent choice of words. Talented.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/28/2017 7:57:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Rhoda. Much appreciated.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/10/2017 11:33:00 AM
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Nostalgia is so sweet, Line! I really enjoyed your write xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2017 7:32:00 PM
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Thank you, Mike. I love your visits. Have a spectacular weekend!

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