Notes About The Poem

On Tranquil Lake

Stonelick Lake is tranquil
Where cattails grow so tall
It's where the muskrat feed
Before winds of Autumn call

Along its banks, deer forage
With dark and darting eyes
They listen to birds sing out
So predators won't surprise

A boy wears his dad's straw hat
Stands in the cool lake grass
Spends the day, cane pole held
To fish in this lake of glass

The falling sun chills the air
As birds glide in color red
The boy's chores never done
He fished at the lake instead

11/9/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Beautiful every word! The scene imagined and might the little scamp be in trouble when he goes home?!
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 7:48 PM
Beautiful imagery, a very pleasant read.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 4:08 PM
what awesome imagery Frederic you transported me right there to the lake - am adding this to my faves it is an absolute gem:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
One Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 3:42 PM
You really emptied your soul here... nice flow to your poem..
Sands Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 2:43 PM
A wonderful poem to read. It would be nice to be there :)
Scythe Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Great imagery, it's very clear to my mind's eye.
Smith Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 1:15 PM
I can still feel that mud between my toes, good one Frederic, loved it...
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Love the imagery , Frederic, great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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