Anoucheka Gangabissoon Poet Sonnet

On Thy Starry Ride

Glittery was that sky
Silvery was that carpet
That on which rode the blue butterfly
To show the way to the holy ballet

Divine was that sight
A star living with light
Your face shining with might
O my darling father, my knight!

Gone was your soul, to that land
Called by some as the Never-never land
Alone and cold with fright
I did shed tears that night!

Blissful dance, harmonious ballet
Pray life lead me there with thy cabaret!

15th Place
Contest : Shooting Stars
Sponsored by : Tirzah Conway

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Sara Kendrick August 23, 2012 at 2:49 PM Congrats on your very creative winning work..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 21, 2012 at 11:35 AM Many congratulations on your win Anoucheka xx

Carol Sunshine Brown August 21, 2012 at 6:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol

David Williams August 21, 2012 at 3:40 AM Anoucheka big congrats on your win...David

Tirzah Conway August 20, 2012 at 2:12 PM Congrats on your 15th place finish in my contest!~Tirzah~

Carol Sunshine Brown August 17, 2012 at 5:08 AM I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Anoucheka. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol