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On This Serene Red Parasol Beach Day

Atop a rock, there sits a girl. A hat adorns her head as she enjoys a chat with her young friend beside the pretty bay on this serene red parasol beach day. I breathe the salty air in through my nose and feel the warmth of sand between my toes. I listen to the squawks of gulls at play on this serene red parasol beach day. I walk along the shore and reminisce about lost love when I see sweethearts kiss down by the water’s edge not far away on this serene red parasol beach day. My parasol is blue, but it will do when finally I find the perfect view. A towel I lay right here where I will stay on this serene red parasol beach day Written June 25, 2016 for Eve Roper's "The Red Parasol by Alfred Glendening" Poetry Contest
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Smith Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Wonderful win Andrea, congratulations...
Warrior Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Congrats on the win Andrea...^WW^
Rycroft Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Congrats on a beautiful red parasol poem x
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Lovely interpretation using a great form, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win in 'the red parasol' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Oh lovely Andrea,many congratulations!
Richards Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:50 AM
A lovely view of this painting, Andrea! Congrats to you! :)
Scars Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Andrea! what an amazing poem! First place worthy lady!! :)-luloo
Grasso Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Top Winner! Congratulations, Andrea! Beautifully done!
Gibson Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on the lovely winning word picture you created. The repeating line was a great element.
Lawless Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Andrea, a beautiful repeating line anchored this walk along the beach observing and reminiscing. Congrats on the top spot.
Y. Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You have penned a lovely piece with amazing imagery. The poem complimented the painting very good. I love the beach too. Congratulations on your top win it was well deserved: -) Alexis
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:31 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your well, deserved first placement with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:40 AM
One of your best Kyrielle poems Andrea! I loved this entry. Congratulations on your top win my friend! 7 ; )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 1:53 AM
A lovely scene described well......nicely penned....congratulations on your first place win...
Roper Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Andrea, this was a beautiful piece congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Godwin Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 1:42 AM
A lovely poem, Andrea, so serene and prettily told. A gem ... CayCay
Walker Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Your love of the beach coming through. Love the repeating line.
Kannan Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Beautifully written..Gud luck in the contest...
Horsman Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:39 PM
A new form i see here for me, you write to it with excellence. as usual love it
Kriticos Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Nice on Andrea! Glad I stopped by to check it out. It makes me want to go to the beach!
Austin Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 1:49 PM
OOOOWWW< you make me want to flop under that red parasol and dabble toes in the sand. Love, daver
Warrior Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Beautifully portrayed Andrea...good luck in contest my friend...^WW^
Delaney Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Beautiful title that is also the refrain. You created a great mood to capture this image. Wonderful entry as usual. SuZ
Daniel Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 6:58 AM
A 7 for this beautiful and lovely piece:)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:51 AM
What a delightful and peaceful day on the beach dear, Andrea! Surely a winner! Good luck!
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