On This Day Till Forever Ends

On this day
I give my heart to my best friend,
With our hands joined
We’ll walk till forever ends.

On this day
We share the love in our hearts,
And on this day
Our new life together starts.

On this day
We celebrate with family and friends,
Our love is a treasure
The pot of gold at rainbow’s end.

On this day
We two shall become one,
Our love shines brightly
Even when the day is done.

On this day
I will marry my true love,
A special blessing
Sent down from above.

On this day
I vow to honor and love my best friend,
In sickness and in health
Till forever ends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Adeite Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 8:03 AM
This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke
Fraser Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deborah>>James
Montgomery Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Wow..this is an amazing poem! I love it:]
Christian Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 3:36 AM
a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane
Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 4:58 AM
Deborah - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deborah. Love, Carol
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August 9, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Beautiful poetic love- Congratulations on being featured, Deborah Keep writing! DAS-J
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August 9, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Uplifting view. Sounds like love to me. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 11:04 AM
Beautiful write to a dear friend,>>James
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