Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Rhyme

On the Wings of Words

On The Wings Of Words

For quite a time no word would rhyme 
So heavy is the quill, so dense is the ink
And the word just succumbs and loses its prime 
While the heart carries its weight and drops its link
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No woven words would whisper a woe 
To a hidden power of surrender that started to reign 
As a valiant heart that denies the victory of a foe
And greets pain not just in drops but rather rain
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I run of Light
Feel so tight
I seek sight
To dare night
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My word swallowed its sound
As I sighed for silence
A wish to have the soul drowned 
And attain the presence of a guidance 
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I want to remain silent 
Be aware of each moment 
Render the dormant vibrant 
And inner beauty fluent 
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I want my word towards the zenith mount
Be light and crystal, intense and of worth 
Be of insight.. inspiration, a real fount
My spirit on the wings of words to a rebirth..

Besma

 August 24th,  2023

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Hiya Sharma September 12, 2023 at 7:44 PM This is indeed a very soul stirring, poignant and evocative write with different emotions, ranging from darkness to yearning for light and hope. I can truly feel the vulnerability to my heart's core and somewhat these lines deeply resonated with me.. "So heavy is the quill, so dense is the ink" So aching.. "My word swallowed its sound, As I sighed for silence" Very heartfelt dear beautiful poetess.. This piece is definitely a FAV! Sending you lots of love and best wishes- Hiya :)

Silent One September 11, 2023 at 1:18 PM My dear sister you always make people feel in your poems.. this one is so emotive and we can see you pouring out your emotions here... its like a rebirth of a poet.. there is an uplifting message at the end of the journey that many will relate to... excellent poetry.

Bill Baker September 8, 2023 at 2:51 PM May your wants be granted, that we may be blessed with poems filled with wisdom. Nice rhyming and imagery, Besma. "I want to remain silent Be aware of each moment Render the dormant vibrant And inner beauty fluent" resonates with my soul. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, Besma. I'll be following your poetry now and hope to become friends with you. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Besma Riabi Dziri September 8, 2023 at 3:23 PM I would like to deeply thank you for your remarkable beauty and humility, Bill.. Reading and commenting on my humble poetry truly brings a huge delight let alone appreciating and praising ! Thank you so much for honouring my humble words.. grateful and honoured by your graceful presence and wonderful feedback ! God bless you. Best regards.

Victor Buhagiar September 4, 2023 at 11:16 AM I admit I missed your beautiful, emotive poems. Today's inspiration is worthy of acclaim and deserves a POTD. Yet I feel sadness. Hope all are well at home. Personally, I was very sick, but now I'm on the mend. Blessings my friend. Besma Riabi Dziri September 5, 2023 at 3:43 AM I can’t thank you enough, Victor my friend for honouring my words and showing me recognition for my humble poetry.. I'm deeply grateful to you and I thank you from the depth of my heart.. I hope you have recovered and are well now.. My most sincere prayers for you to be safe and happy.. God bless you.

Vijay Pandit September 4, 2023 at 7:12 AM I want my word towards the zenith mount Be light and crystal, intense and of worth Be of insight.. inspiration, a real fount--splendid vocabulary my friend. It's been a while--glad to see you again, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri September 5, 2023 at 3:38 AM All the honour and great delight are truly mine, dear Vijay.. I truly feel home with souls I love, care for and venerate.. thank you so much for being with your heartfelt and kind words. God bless you.

Robert Lindley September 4, 2023 at 5:38 AM My good friend, this poem presents its beauty in profoundly written words. Its depths are truly awe inspiring. Yes , in your seeking you seek both light and truth to present poetry to others. I pray you are well and that you keep on writing wonderful verse! May God bless you. A gem and a fav.. Besma Riabi Dziri September 5, 2023 at 3:36 AM A treat to read your elevating and beautiful words, dear Robert.. A true inspiration you are! Thank you so much for being here with a heart full of compassion and a mind of deep sight.. an honour and a tremendous pleasure to see and read you.. God bless you.