On the Train In Autumn

pumpkin lips whisper

textured oceans of wheat fields

trees  fly by burnished
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 12:44 AM
Very beautiful images in this one, Eiken! Every single line is wonderful.
Horsman Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 6:30 PM
beautiful description of your journey Eiken. all the best Harry
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