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On the Tip of a Raindrop

Lonely dreams... Childish whispers... Tiptoed toed steps... From the stones of miracles. To arch and curve in heavenly grace, for a reflection... unlike any other of these days. To dance... and lift a cloud of gloom, once cast on a sunless evening. Curve and leap... and bring down the stars and join them...in their heavenly dance; nestled...under the wing of peace. And yet...it is a dream dreamt alone. But as hopeful as the stars. Never... in a thousand years... will it be true? The solitary dream... to dance on the tip of a raindrop 11/23/2018

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Date: 1/17/2019 7:47:00 AM
Beautifully done. The title an invitation to go and find a rainbow.....
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 1/24/2019 9:47:00 AM
Thanks John, and sorry for being so late to reply! :)
Date: 12/23/2018 10:31:00 AM
This is just splendidly done! Congrats on your win.
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 12/25/2018 11:33:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 12/2/2018 1:44:00 AM
Very lovely Kaveesha. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 12/4/2018 6:31:00 AM
Thanks Connie, for your comment and visit.
Date: 11/26/2018 11:57:00 AM
Like a fairy tale come to life - leaves one with a smile!
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/27/2018 4:11:00 AM
Thank you Craig, your comment means a lot to me.
Date: 11/26/2018 12:13:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win, Kaveesha! :)
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/26/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 11/25/2018 7:42:00 PM
Lovely, Kaveesha. Congrats on your win.
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/26/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/25/2018 7:03:00 PM
Love this, Kaveesha...well done! Congratulations on your win in the contest...Charlie
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/26/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, I'm glad you liked this one.
Date: 11/25/2018 6:53:00 PM
Nicely done, Kaveesha, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/26/2018 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Eve, for your comment and visit.
Date: 11/25/2018 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Kaveesha!:-) Very well-written!
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/26/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Edward.
Date: 11/23/2018 9:29:00 PM
Gorgeous gem of a poem! Enjoyed this, Kaveesha! :)
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/23/2018 10:49:00 PM
Thank you Laura, I enjoyed writing it as well! :)
Date: 11/23/2018 10:30:00 AM
I love this little poem, the theme and the dream are wonderful. Beautifully done.
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/23/2018 6:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Chris.

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