On the Tip of a Raindrop

Lonely dreams...
Childish whispers...
Tiptoed toed steps...
From the stones of miracles.
To arch and curve in heavenly grace,
for a reflection... unlike any other of these days.
To dance... and lift a cloud of gloom,
once cast on a sunless evening.
Curve and leap... and bring down the stars
and join them...in their heavenly dance;
nestled...under the wing of peace. 
And yet...it is a dream
dreamt alone.
But as hopeful as the stars.
Never... in a thousand years...
will it be true?
The solitary dream... to dance
on the tip of a raindrop

11/23/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lawless Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Beautifully done. The title an invitation to go and find a rainbow.....
Ruwindi Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Thanks John, and sorry for being so late to reply! :)
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 10:31 AM
This is just splendidly done! Congrats on your win.
Ruwindi Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 11:33 PM
Thank you! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Very lovely Kaveesha. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
Ruwindi Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Thanks Connie, for your comment and visit.
Cornish Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Like a fairy tale come to life - leaves one with a smile!
Ruwindi Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:11 AM
Thank you Craig, your comment means a lot to me.
Leiser Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:13 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win, Kaveesha! :)
Ruwindi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Thank you Laura.
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:42 PM
Lovely, Kaveesha. Congrats on your win.
Ruwindi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Thank you Line.
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Love this, Kaveesha...well done! Congratulations on your win in the contest...Charlie
Ruwindi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Thanks Charlie, I'm glad you liked this one.
Roper Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Nicely done, Kaveesha, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
Ruwindi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:02 AM
Thank you Eve, for your comment and visit.
Ibeh Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 5:58 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Kaveesha!:-) Very well-written!
Ruwindi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Edward.
Leiser Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Gorgeous gem of a poem! Enjoyed this, Kaveesha! :)
Ruwindi Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Thank you Laura, I enjoyed writing it as well! :)
Green Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 10:30 AM
I love this little poem, the theme and the dream are wonderful. Beautifully done.
Ruwindi Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Thank you very much, Chris.
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