On the Spot Poem 1

I want to post a poem
that i'm making up right now
i want to see if everyday i can
i know i know how.

so this one is the first one 
tomorrows will have much more
i'm just letting you all know
so you don't think i'm a bore.

i have many things to say
doesn't always come out right
i do always mean well
and i love to make peoples day bright.

i have three kids i love
ages 14,8, and 3
they all keep me on my feet
but i know they all love me .

that's all i have for now
i will be back again to share more 
and read others work
i love being on this its awesome for sure.

23-5-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 23, 2016 at 6:33 AM
Hayley ,, good verse... but I have a question. Why is this under ABC form? You are a talented writer, I hope you consider changing the form. Thanks... Linda
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May 22, 2016 at 1:24 PM
First, thank you for your kind words on my poem! If this is a made up on the spot poem, then Hayley..."Write On" and keep on writing on because you do have something to say and to share! I do look forward to reading your works!!! Write On!!! :-)
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