On the Skids

On the skids with no brakes,
thankfully, a memory;
that began with falling,
falling over and over again,
with bruises that healed;
such is childhood.

I tried to attack the slippery slope,
challenged by youtube videos
that I could wisely imbibe;
teenager at heart was I…
to fall flat, flatter than a pancake.

As this was a few years back,
still a Big-Mac Grandmother;
a smucker-grape hugger.
Bigger than life;
life was bigger than me.

Who was I to inspire?
I lit my bum on fire.
Who am I to think
that each one was like the other?

Those grand-girls flew past me, in blurs.
The youngest boy, now ten,
screamed until I relinquished,
took off those skates
then circled the rink
as I chased him down.

His elder brother, held on for dear life,
just wouldn’t let go
of the skate mate;
but I am old,
or so I am told.

I grew up when no helmet
was required, where
seat belts were optional;
free to choose, “I will survive.”

So, do I think today’s kids
are wimps? I’ve joined
the ranks of wimpiness;
it is the key to living longer.

By the way, the kid
won’t climb a tree.
He sees each and every bug.
Were they there when I was young?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 2/14/2025 11:37:00 AM
Hey Kim, I have also had my spills as my son was growing up and one or two have left their mark but I'm sure I won't be doing any skidding with my grandaughter, she's only two now, grandma must do her stunts more carefully now! Enjoyed your poem my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:49:00 PM
Even when we are careful those rugrats pull us into some situations…lol! Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs and HVD!
Date: 2/12/2025 3:44:00 PM
Such raw memory, even the sweet ones - so beautifully written, reaches to my center <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 2/12/2025 8:10:00 AM
Hi Kim, how things have changed since my childhood, your poem sums it up perfectly. xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:50:00 PM
For sure! Thank you, John!
Date: 2/12/2025 5:45:00 AM
- I wouldn't dare try it today, Kim ... maybe 30 years ago :))) - I loved climbing trees as a child ... - I also grew up without a helmet and seatbelt - Take it easy grandma :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2025 7:13:00 AM
I will! Now I have problems with my leg. If I can walk, I am good.
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