Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

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On the Shore of the River

I close my eyes and listen to the river flowing
The water is low and the rocks are showing
Revealing my soul, while uncovering peace
I stand and I listen while I release…
Turbulent feelings that are caught like a stick
In the flowing river, here’s to thoughts I kick…
And with each kick, freedom finds me here
On the shore of the river, that is so near

Heidi Sands

6/14/22

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Harry Horsman June 19, 2022 at 9:28 PM A special place it seems, Heidi, the poetry like your sentiment is truly beautiful...Harry Heidi Sands June 20, 2022 at 5:51 AM Thank you Harry. It is nice to see your comment. Yes, it is a special place. :)

Sotto Poet June 19, 2022 at 7:47 AM Heidi, this is such a wonderful approach to let go and find happiness in your life!! Your words are so elegantly flowing, much like the stream that carries the emotions that are expressed in your poetry!! Heidi Sands June 19, 2022 at 8:00 AM Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Mike Gentile June 19, 2022 at 5:02 AM What a marvelous way to release and find peace Heidi!! Your words flow as beautifully as the river that bears the thoughts of your poem!! Happy Sunday xxoo Heidi Sands June 19, 2022 at 5:50 AM Thank you very much Mike. Happy Sunday :)

Demetrios Trifiatis June 16, 2022 at 2:47 PM Peaceful and harmonious poem ., my dearest friend, Heidi. Much enjoyed. Blessing! Heidi Sands June 16, 2022 at 3:57 PM Thank you Demetrios. Blessings :)

Gershon Wolf June 15, 2022 at 5:31 PM Refreshing... and profound as well. The rush of water is always bracing. Thanks, Heidi. Heidi Sands June 15, 2022 at 6:01 PM Thank you Gershon and you are welcome :)

Deb M June 15, 2022 at 8:49 AM Heidi…an incredibly beautiful poem about the beauty and healing of a river. Debx Heidi Sands June 15, 2022 at 9:09 AM Thank you Deb. :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 14, 2022 at 9:04 PM Nature has such soothing and healing for us. Beautiful Heidi. Blessings xxoo Heidi Sands June 15, 2022 at 4:38 AM Yes it does. Thank you Connie :)

Jennifer Proxenos June 14, 2022 at 1:26 PM A beautifully descriptive poem of your innermost feelings love it my friend hugs Jennifer Heidi Sands June 14, 2022 at 1:38 PM Thank you so much Jennifer. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit June 14, 2022 at 12:28 PM I like the photo and the rhythm of your poem. Both beautiful. A FAVE for the upbeat voice of your poem. Heidi Sands June 14, 2022 at 1:37 PM Thank you so much Vijay. For some reason the photos that I take and upload turn out blurry on my page, but I got many photos today. I am happy you like this and really appreciate the Fave :)