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On the Shore of the River

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I close my eyes and listen to the river flowing The water is low and the rocks are showing Revealing my soul, while uncovering peace I stand and I listen while I release… Turbulent feelings that are caught like a stick In the flowing river, here’s to thoughts I kick… And with each kick, freedom finds me here On the shore of the river, that is so near Heidi Sands 6/14/22

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Harry Horsman

Date: 6/19/2022 9:28:00 PM

A special place it seems, Heidi, the poetry like your sentiment is truly beautiful...Harry

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2022 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Harry. It is nice to see your comment. Yes, it is a special place. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/19/2022 7:47:00 AM

Heidi, this is such a wonderful approach to let go and find happiness in your life!! Your words are so elegantly flowing, much like the stream that carries the emotions that are expressed in your poetry!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/19/2022 8:00:00 AM

Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/19/2022 5:02:00 AM

What a marvelous way to release and find peace Heidi!! Your words flow as beautifully as the river that bears the thoughts of your poem!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/19/2022 5:50:00 AM

Thank you very much Mike. Happy Sunday :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/16/2022 2:47:00 PM

Peaceful and harmonious poem ., my dearest friend, Heidi. Much enjoyed. Blessing!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2022 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios. Blessings :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/15/2022 5:31:00 PM

Refreshing... and profound as well. The rush of water is always bracing. Thanks, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2022 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Gershon and you are welcome :)

Deb M

Date: 6/15/2022 8:49:00 AM

Heidi…an incredibly beautiful poem about the beauty and healing of a river. Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2022 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Deb. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2022 9:04:00 PM

Nature has such soothing and healing for us. Beautiful Heidi. Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2022 4:38:00 AM

Yes it does. Thank you Connie :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/14/2022 1:26:00 PM

A beautifully descriptive poem of your innermost feelings love it my friend hugs Jennifer

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2022 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/14/2022 12:28:00 PM

I like the photo and the rhythm of your poem. Both beautiful. A FAVE for the upbeat voice of your poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2022 1:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay. For some reason the photos that I take and upload turn out blurry on my page, but I got many photos today. I am happy you like this and really appreciate the Fave :)