Notes About The Poem

On the Shore

As I face the shore, I gaze upon
                A half-buried orange sun 
             That illuminates the horizon
                Time stands frozen here

                Dusk is fast approaching
           The tide is ebbing and flowing
                   Continually crashing
                 Into my welcoming feet

                         Soon to erase
                My footprints in the sand 
              I'm savoring the tranquility 
                  And refreshing zephyr
                         
         I wish I could spend the night here
      I crave these precious, lonely moments 
                    This is where I find 
                     My peace of mind


FEBRUARY WK 2,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO 20 lines 
Sponsored by Brian Strand (Winner: 1st Place)
Date written and posted: 03/24/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marc Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, P.M.!:-)
Sands Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:21 AM
I have found your 'on the shore' poem and I love it Edward. Well done :)
Ibeh Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Thank you, Heidi!:-) xoxo
A   Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 7:48 PM
Thanks for the lovely reply....Linda
A  Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Edward Ibeh, enjoyed this poem of yours. SKAT
Ibeh Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Thanks, SKAT:-)
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March 25, 2016 at 6:22 AM
Wonderful read and imagery. A 7 plus.... Linda
Ibeh Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Thanks, Linda. I appreciate it.
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