"on the Shelf"

What a world we have traveled through....
All our steps, long ones ,but are you sure
you stepped too....
We dust off our dresser and move the frames
to see our self....
I know where I've been and what I've done but
you ended up just a snow globe on a shelf....
You stayed inside your glass bubble from the 
world you were protected....
Your shoes stayed in the closet and your jacket
on the hook, never to be rejected....
I can move you from the window so the light won't
fade or come free from its case....
Its so sad that love and my words could never brighten
that face....
I could fall a million times but my dreams and passions
will always brace my landing....
Off the shelf you could fall but only broken glass and
water stains will be remaining....
Time to fly away my bird,as my cage door is always open....
Till we meet again another day,just sit with dreams and hoping...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations on your win with this great work..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 8:56 PM
special cheers on the win, michael.. i adore this undulating piece! warmest, nette
R Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 12:14 AM
Congrats, Michael, on this terrific poem making it to the top list! Really wonderful!Hugs, Emilia
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Oh this must of come from your heart Michael cause these words couldn't come from no where else.Wonderful write and a well deserved win.Teresa
Neels Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Michael, congratulations on your win with this gem. Btw my birthday is only on 25 December, thanks for the advance wishes ;) love W xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:12 PM
gosh, how did I ever miss this one, Michael. It's magnificent! Congatulations. Luv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 5:21 PM
You know I write one kinda like this about how my ex husband loved me..It's called Precious Fare...you know what they say..sometimes love just ain't enough...(Look at you winning! Huzzah! I am so happy for you.) Light & Love
Henderson Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:46 PM
One way love is always a sad thing. Good poem -Charles
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your winning write in Frank's Love Story Contest Michael. Love,Carol
Richards Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Such a heart moving poem, Michael....filled with emotion. A well deserved win!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on this well deservedwin,Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Super congrats to my White Knight of poetry ... on your big win in the Love Story contest .. a wonderful write and excellent entry luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem.. and how about those boys in blue? 41 to 7 .. it was a funeral not a football game.. I luved it.. only wish they have televised it luv..
Mannan Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Many congratulations Micheal for this super win for a super write.
Haick Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 1:59 PM
Always a joy to read your poems, Michael..always remarkable depth with a touch of humor sometimes..Love this...Audrey
Neels Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Hmmm soap opera? No it's not, just an indication that you lived your life Michael. I eventually got time to read tonight. Hope you are okay Mr. F (",) xoxo btw I love this write
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:38 AM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Michael. Love, Carol :)
Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Michael I really luv this poem.. hope u enter it in the Love Story contest ...making it free verse ... its extremely eloquent in it's message my luv.. your Jersey Girl is happy happy now that the GIANTS took it to the house ..luv.. forever..
Culverhouse Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:03 PM
enjoyed reading today!
Wilson Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:30 PM
very touching ..take care~Deb
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Interesting metaphorical language that you used in this one..I am glad that I chose to read this one this eve..I was delighted at the kind comments you made about my work..Sara
Richards Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:52 PM
Wow...this one is sad, melancholy and so poignant....love in a glass bubble...sitting on a shelf. What a well done metaphor this is. Great writing, Michael. :)
Roberts Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:48 PM
or love it, if I could type today
Roberts Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:48 PM
love mit Michael, beautiful poem
Washington Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Nice poem I like it. Thanks for commenting on my I'm so tired. just blowing off some stress.
Falotico Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 2:11 PM
An old poem I wrote years ago about a past relationship.... I know My life is a soap opera lol
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