On the Run

the robust red fox midst emerald field — bilocation he’s there, he’s here in my heart, still on the run

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/20/2024 11:07:00 AM

Kim, so you have a bit of a fox in your heart? I have to think about it for a moment I suppose it's part of nature, and we should respect and honor all of it. It's also nice that there's a bit of a thrill in watching something so magical and quick.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2024 7:12:00 PM

I appreciate you so much, Duke! You see past what I write and into the heart. Bless you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2024 10:58:00 AM

My cousin is a shifty fellow, is he not?! ~ Wolf, as in Fox

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2024 7:13:00 PM

What,Wolfie, you thought I wouldn’t understand without explanation? ;)

Suzette Richards

Date: 6/13/2024 6:17:00 AM

I loved how you employed the pivotal image in line 3 in this Tanka, rich in imagery. A poignant subject, Kim, obviously dear to your heart. Fox cubs are starting to make their appearance about now and pose no threat to domestic animals.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2024 8:08:00 AM

This one was a beauty! They don’t using stand still for our viewing so we need to follow them with our eyes as they disappear and only remain in our imagination. Thank you, Suzette!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/12/2024 6:08:00 PM

Ah, so sensitive.... loved it

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/12/2024 3:12:00 PM

Hi Kim, The image of that red fox darting here and there truly brought it to life. Enjoyed this clever Haiku..will fave it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2024 8:10:00 PM

Thank you for the fave, Nancy!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/12/2024 4:24:00 AM

Dear Kim, your haiku on the red fox is so captivating and alive! I Love how you captured its swift movement and spirit. Short but powerful - well done! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2024 5:35:00 AM

I really appreciate. What a beautiful sighting yesterday! Blessings, my friend!