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On the Rocks

Sober, I can feel again. A hurricane of emotions crash against my shores. Pain, so real again. I can't stop the rain from fallin'. Eye's wide open, blood flowing again. No substance to stop the flooding. Prayers, God forgive my sins. Wondering if he still listens.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/7/2015 1:17:00 PM
Oh, there is so much I could say. I love the raw emotion and the theme is something I know I have felt at times in my life so I related. Some very creative and beautiful lines in this one. If you want to be technically correct, you should capitalize 'he.' A provocative and moving write ... CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/7/2015 1:18:00 PM
As I was clicking off the page, I noticed how clever the title was ... CayCay

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