On the Road From Banff To Buckie

I met a spicy young lassie
on the road from Banff to Buckie
Her eyes were full of sparkle.
I thought I might get lucky.
Polite chit chat over cola.
With a nip of apricot brandy.
Her demeanor and wit quite trendy
yet, keeping composure handy.

The short of my story is this. 
I married that lass in the spring.
Her eyes are still full of sparkle.
No longer a bird on the wing.
We met between Banff and Buckie.
Now an old married lady in Leith,
as Edinburgh casts its shadow,
her tenure is framed in gold leaf. 

© Apr 16 2011 CGH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ramsdale Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 12:38 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Thvia's "Indulge Me" contest Charles. Love,Carol
Taylor Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Congrats on 3rd Place, Charles. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Congrats Charles on your fantastic win with this great write on Scotland poetry luv..
Johnson Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 11:04 AM
You truly did get lucky indeed. Congratulations Charles. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:09 AM
sensational, charles...heaps of cheers for to you for your awesome win!! :) huggs!
Mehta Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Charles
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 3:06 PM
per your request of course. What do you think?
Henderson Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 11:30 AM
Actually that is what I had in mind.
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August 2, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Two possible other titles: "My Scottish Lassie" or "On the Road from Banff to Buckie."
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August 2, 2011 at 11:29 AM
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April 24, 2011 at 2:47 PM
HOw cute, Charles. It makes me wonder if it is complete fiction or if there is some truth in it. Did you marry a professoress by chance? Why that title? It reminded me almost of a limerick type of poem!
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