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On the Road From Banff To Buckie

I met a spicy young lassie on the road from Banff to Buckie Her eyes were full of sparkle. I thought I might get lucky. Polite chit chat over cola. With a nip of apricot brandy. Her demeanor and wit quite trendy yet, keeping composure handy. The short of my story is this. I married that lass in the spring. Her eyes are still full of sparkle. No longer a bird on the wing. We met between Banff and Buckie. Now an old married lady in Leith, as Edinburgh casts its shadow, her tenure is framed in gold leaf. © Apr 16 2011 CGH

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Date: 8/3/2011 12:38:00 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Thvia's "Indulge Me" contest Charles. Love,Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd Place, Charles. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:07:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your fantastic win with this great write on Scotland poetry luv..
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Date: 8/2/2011 11:04:00 AM
You truly did get lucky indeed. Congratulations Charles. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:09:00 AM
sensational, charles...heaps of cheers for to you for your awesome win!! :) huggs!
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Charles
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:06:00 PM
Two possible other titles: "My Scottish Lassie" or "On the Road from Banff to Buckie."
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Charles Henderson
Date: 8/2/2011 11:29:00 AM
Date: 4/25/2011 3:06:00 PM
per your request of course. What do you think?
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Charles Henderson
Date: 8/2/2011 11:30:00 AM
Actually that is what I had in mind.
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Charles Henderson
Date: 8/2/2011 11:28:00 AM
Date: 4/24/2011 2:47:00 PM
HOw cute, Charles. It makes me wonder if it is complete fiction or if there is some truth in it. Did you marry a professoress by chance? Why that title? It reminded me almost of a limerick type of poem!
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