On the Promenade

Tour boat, ferry, sailboat, skiff
Bounce along the briny;
Sunshine sparkles on the waves,
Reflections bright and shiny.

Blimp and copter in the sky
Meeting no resistance;
Bridge, majestic, guarding all – 
A pillar in the distance.

Police boat passes, pulsing blue
And beeps at people waving;
Children, on a trip from school,
Reluctantly behaving.

Downtown on the promenade,
The river slowly flowing;
I soak up my surroundings,
Glad for time before my going.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Johnson Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Reluctantly behaving, the little darlin's. :)
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Such a vibrant descriptive write - you brought the promenade to life:-) It sounds a lot bustling and busy than on our quiet little Isalnd hugs Jan xx7
Manassian Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 3:04 AM
You are so....expressive, dear. This was a lovely write...I saw it all in my mind's eye. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 9:41 PM
I love the promenade! The one alongside the beach at Rio was SO nice!!
Hoffman Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:25 PM
I can just picture the New York scenery! Nice poem about it!:)
Mcleod Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Great rhythms again. Very catchy like a song.
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