On the Patio

tip tap tip..tap- the missel prepares lunch-time 's snack

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/16/2009 4:15:00 PM

hmmm the miss will? or is there a missel? you let me know! LOL Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/16/2009 4:02:00 PM

A pleasure to read..smiling. BG

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/16/2009 9:07:00 AM

cute, enjoyed

Farah Chamma

Date: 11/16/2009 5:32:00 AM

A very nice write Brian...simplicity... farah

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2009 4:54:00 AM

Very innovative, Brian, enjoyed reading to start my busy day... thankxxx for your blog poem.. very well written and I hope more will participate in Sara's project.. alos, thankxxx for letting me know my Life in Suburbia was a featured poem this week.. I am very honored ...how are these chosen? appreciate your encouragement and guidance also... happy Monday.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/16/2009 12:33:00 AM

Yes indeed , Brian . We also made a meal of it against the Aussies , but ; " In B.O'D ,we trust " ......