On the Patio

tip
tap
tip..tap-
the missel
prepares  lunch-time 's snack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 4:15 PM
hmmm the miss will? or is there a missel? you let me know! LOL Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 4:02 PM
A pleasure to read..smiling. BG
Culverhouse Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 9:07 AM
cute, enjoyed
Chamma Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 5:32 AM
A very nice write Brian...simplicity... farah
Sweetheart Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 4:54 AM
Very innovative, Brian, enjoyed reading to start my busy day... thankxxx for your blog poem.. very well written and I hope more will participate in Sara's project.. alos, thankxxx for letting me know my Life in Suburbia was a featured poem this week.. I am very honored ...how are these chosen? appreciate your encouragement and guidance also... happy Monday.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Kelly Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 12:33 AM
Yes indeed , Brian . We also made a meal of it against the Aussies , but ; " In B.O'D ,we trust " ......
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