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On the Pathway

An aura of ease I carry with me. A river, I’m rolling, just rolling along. I move with an adaptability. An aura of ease I carry with me. Close to the ground, yet with fluidity, and my heart often swells with glad song. An aura of ease I carry with me; a river, I’m rolling, just rolling along. I’ll move with that naturalness called ease on the pathway to my final sea. Should waves arise from an extra strong breeze; I’ll move with that naturalness called ease! When I see sky blaze a last time cerise and feel eternity beckoning me, I’ll move with that naturalness called ease on the pathway to my final sea. For Paula Swanson's Contest: "I Carry With Me"

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Date: 6/13/2014 9:09:00 PM
OOh beautiful images, An aura of ease I carry with me, I love that, you're poetry amazes and inspires me :)
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Date: 1/26/2014 12:58:00 AM
Damn fine write in my opinion Andrea, i can see it has had lots of reads... I was just thinking of taking a break by a river, but i have been saved a journey, on finding this on your page..' have a great day..'
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Date: 10/11/2012 10:04:00 AM
and i read you with an ease, an ease of pure pleasure...
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Date: 11/9/2011 12:27:00 PM
I'm enjoying reading this one again - your newest oldest!!
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Andrea. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 7:37:00 AM
This poem flows very nicely.
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:23:00 AM
This has a nice calming effect that I like so much..."ease"-one of the best things to carry in life...and the poem moves with such fluidity and elegant grace..Congrats Andrea on your win..wish you happiness always...love you..
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Date: 5/15/2011 11:00:00 AM
a beautiful piece of well written poetry. thank you for commenting on Pine Cone Kissing Needles.
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:32:00 AM
Ahhh....I envy you the ease! I think for most of us it is a bit of a struggle to 'go with the flow'....somedays yes...but somedays no way!! LOL ! Congrats!!!!
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:12:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Andrea : )
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:44:00 AM
Hi ANDREA,congrats on your win...:)..kash
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:15:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in Paula's contest with this magnificent write my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congrats my Poet friend on your HM in the contest...always nice to be the same list as you...love Michael
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:41:00 AM
Good write. Lots of wisdom and inspiration. A wonderful outlook on life. Very, very well done.
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:10:00 AM
congrats on the hm..cory
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Date: 5/14/2011 11:43:00 PM
Great poem! Many congrats on your win x
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:48:00 PM
there you go again, andie girl.. my huggie cheers to you for ths eauty of a piece! yeyy..:) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:31:00 PM
Good write. Congrats
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:49:00 PM
Now Andrea i have enjoyed this piece (especially the line with the word cerise,) it flows so easy (a really peacefull piece)
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Date: 5/13/2011 10:35:00 AM
Reads like winners' circle for sure..Hope that this is your personality and this is true for you...I know that it could just be an idea from observing others..Good luck..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara
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Date: 5/12/2011 11:28:00 PM
Great Job with this! R.M.
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:34:00 PM
Awesome write. I will move along with ease on my way to bed. Your my last read of the night and it is getting late. love phyl
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:33:00 PM
Awesome write. I will move along with ease on my way to bed. Your my last read of the night and it is getting late. love phyl
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:13:00 PM
SOUP MAIL..:)
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:02:00 PM
another truly awesome write Andrea and felt every movement as u penned it luv.. good luck in the contest ..this definitely reads winners..and I would like to frame your comment to me on the multiple wins because so many good poems were entered in my contests as always are.. thankxx for this endearing comment and understanding of the way my brain works..to make others feel their worth after creating beautiful poetry luv..
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