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On the Paseo Del Rio

his eyes as we stroll

to the rainforest café. . . 

bright flowers float by


for Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No.4 Poetry Contest

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Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 11:45 AM

yup that is a romantic stroll

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 22, 2014 at 9:08 AM

rainforest café. Oh! rainforest so wild but colorful. Thanks. love.

Teddy Kimathi

September 11, 2014 at 9:57 AM

What a beautiful imagery and texture! I loved your work Andrea! Congrats to your well, deserved win! <3

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 7:59 AM

I can see the very beautiful scenery on this very beautiful poem of yours my very dear friend Andrea. Congratulations on your great win too. It's my great honor sharing it with you. Many hugs to you from me! Thank you so much for sharing! By the way, I'm so glad you liked my birthday poem to you. Many blessings!love lots, Leonora

David Mohn

September 7, 2014 at 6:49 PM

Beautiful Andrea...congrats

Christine Costello

September 7, 2014 at 10:46 AM

Andrea- congrats on the win-lovely poem. :-) Christine

Judy Konos

September 7, 2014 at 6:44 AM

I "wanna" go there! wow

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2014 at 5:03 AM

- On top of the list - Congratulations on your winning poem - 1st place in the contest: "River Walk" - Beautiful done, I love it, Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

September 6, 2014 at 10:53 AM

Congratulations!!!! Love it. Love and prayers, Gina

Maurice Yvonne

September 6, 2014 at 10:51 AM

from now on i am just going to cut and paste your poems and submit those. CONGRATULATIONS. beautiful haiku and i believe the only one that spoke specifically to the actual area River Walk. also i know you slaved over this entry committing at least five minutes to writing it. do i sound at all bitter?

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2014 at 1:00 PM

hahaha, you brought me a chuckle at your last sentence. Usually I slave for several hours on poems, even on short ones. But for some reason this one came very quickly to me. Most of my time was spent researching River walk!!!

Faye Gibson

September 6, 2014 at 9:03 AM

I like the double image I get...flowers on the water, flowers in his eyes. Beautiful win, Andrea.

Barbara Gorelick

September 6, 2014 at 9:02 AM

Smiling for you...so pretty...BG

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 6, 2014 at 8:35 AM

Congratulations Andrea. Awesome Haiku.

Pandita Sietesantos

September 6, 2014 at 7:36 AM

Congratulations, Andrea, on the Top of the Class win! Well deserved with this lovely haiku! Pandita

John Lawless

September 6, 2014 at 6:35 AM

intriguing ...this haiku...and with a little the nuance of the "bright flowers float by" could that be the "lovers" drifting through the moment?

Richard Ferry

September 6, 2014 at 5:41 AM

Nice to see you on top of the heap....Rick

Jan Allison

September 6, 2014 at 3:09 AM

Woohooo top of the podium - many congrats Andrea :-) A perfect way to end your birthday! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 5, 2014 at 11:30 PM

Andrea that's real awesome! Love the riverside stroll ! Congrats on ur top place win!

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 11:11 PM

Hola, Andrea this has been just plain awesome. So, so awesome, and sweet... Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~