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On the Park Bench At Christmas

I walk into the park on Christmas night.
A wonderland of winter greets my eye.
In shadows with a bluish tinge, the white
of snow looks magical, and it’s piled high.
I’m glad I wore my boots! I look ahead
and see a bench. It’s also steeped with snow.
It looks like Saint Nick’s sleigh or a fun elf sled!
Like a child reborn, to that bench I go,
brush off the snow on one end, and I sit
and singing Jingle Bells, my favorite tune,
I’m taking in the scene, enjoying it.
But getting cold, I know I must leave soon.
To my imaginary one-horse sleigh
I bid farewell; I’m calling it a day!

Dec. 1, 2018  Based on Picture #4
For Sara Kendrick's The Park Bench At Christmas Poetry Contes
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Radke Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win with this dreamlike poem. Very descriptive. Best wishes. Deb
Braun Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Wonderful imagery you painted. Park benches will forever have new meaning.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 2:53 PM
a beautiful; interpretation of the picture Andrea. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:24 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. I wondered if the writer of this one was living the scene as they wrote the sonnet. I hope your Christmas will be a nice one with love and family encircling you. Thanks for dropping by my blog..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 5:52 PM
No dear, I would never be found writing a poem on a snowy park bench. haha
May Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Lovely write Andrea..Congrats on your win..
Nau Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 12:02 AM
LOVE IT, love it! Christmas present and past. Love what you did with the punctuation here ... brave and exactly promising. I’m here with you on the adventure, on the bench with you and feeling the cold. Wonderful image and lighting our senses of everything new and everything old.
Laurie Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:48 PM
G'day Andrea … another one of your fine sonnets. Pleased to read a positive verse about a park bench - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Devonshire Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 12:24 PM
A lovely interpretation of the image, Andrea. And Christmas really is a magical time for children of all ages. Visit me in Florida and our sunshine will warm you, but I'd prefer to gallop away on that horse, leaving the sleigh behind. Hugs and winning wishes for you, Carolyn
Horsman Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Your sonnets, always delight, Andrea, and this is no exception. good luck in contest..
Vaso Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 4:01 AM
Very Christmasy and beautiful! :)
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Andrea, enjoyed reading this this wonderful well written poem that arouses strong emotions because of its beauty. Good luck in the contest.
Rutherford Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:54 AM
A wonderful vision Andree.
Lawless Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 7:50 AM
...OK, now go make a snow angel and have a cup of hot chocolate. Love this take on the contest park bench Andrea.
Rose  Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 6:36 AM
You make me feel like I'm the lucky one sitting on that lovely bench Andrea, I always enjoyed your poetry, Thank you for sharing. Hope all is well with you and yours. This is comment Sunday, could you please leave a few extra comments on site today to help raise the community spirit, it would be most appreciated .
Krutsinger Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:00 PM
A fun elf sled! Yes! Exactly the words I should have used. Perfect! Your imagery is always magnifi-co! Best of luck.
Pandit Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Lovely imagery of Christmas in winter's wonderland..a delightful scenic poem, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 7:22 PM
I know this is for the contest. You need to put the number of picture at the bottom of your poem. You painted a lovely scene. I love the way you mention singing Jingle Bells. My granddaughters love to sing that song. Best luck in the contest. xxoo : )
Devonshire Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Yes, Grandma Got Run Over by a Reindeer is such fun!
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 7:28 PM
actually, Connie, my favorite Xmas songs are these: Winter Wonderland/ Grandma Got Run over by a Reindeer / and the Christmas cookies country song.
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 7:27 PM
thanks, and don't worry. i had to go enter it and add all the other stuff into it, like the number and the picture, etc. That was funner than most contests!! Some of them right now are real doozies. i am giving myself 9 to do, but only half of them really soon. A few just don't grab me so I probably will overlook some of the contests up right now. I hope you have seen my mail . I am calling it a night on the internet and getting busy on the house and dinner now!
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