Željko Sitar Poet Free verse

On the Other Side

On the other side I fly above you,
I can feel your smell 
when you lie to the world.

And you go away just like a wind
and you smile like you have never met me.

So, can you feel that I fly above you,
I do not think so.
You do not care about me 
even I exist on the other side.

On the other side 
I finally see who you are,
I finally see your wishes
which I have never been able to realize.

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Charmaine Chircop August 9, 2013 at 12:09 PM Hello..tnks for returning to my poetry..Hope you get back to writing as well. I read your verses..Sometimes its hard for us to accept the reality we see especially from someone We cared for..but its never too late to move on and start over.Well penned!!!Charma

Harry Horsman March 22, 2012 at 9:13 AM I like this Zeljko, a little advice, this is a free verse poem. if you do not know, just revert to free verse. harry

Ilene Bauer March 17, 2012 at 9:38 AM i like this poem. you describe the way you feel very clearly and poetically. nice one!

Poet Destroyer A March 17, 2012 at 9:00 AM Z.S., Good morning, it's hard for me to see whats on the other side,, where I'm from,, i like your poem,, the feeling is deep,,,"HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)