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On the Ocean's Edge

Follow me down To the cold oceans playground Where children dance and frolic At building sandcastle dreams That the sea will sluice away Beginning its concerto From the driftwood surfing waves Over the metronome melody Of the gilded Herring Gull And the rhythmic percussion From the smoothed rolling pebbles The symphony consumes Softly hanging in the Atlantic winds Just cresting over the song of dawn The strings of the Willow reverberating In concert with the viola of first light…

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Date: 8/13/2010 6:57:00 AM
I am feeling the urge to go back and read poetry from earlier writing of my favorite poets today and this is the one I opened of yours Charlie. I truly enjoyed reading it today and it is one of your best. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/8/2009 11:55:00 AM
Charles, I love this! The sea is such an inspiration and comfort to me, and I am drawn to it more than any other place. Great write! Donna G.
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