On the Nose

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With summer breeze gently blowing, its blue wings flutter, as it dances in the air trying to find the perfect landing spot the cat never knew it would be its nose! 9-13-2020 Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo 3

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2020 7:52:00 AM

Creative use of the form and the topic matter. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Dropping by with congrats on your win. Sara

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/10/2020 6:34:00 AM

So adorably cute :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2020 10:50:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/5/2020 5:26:00 PM

How clever, Joseph. the bird landed on the cat's nose. I wonder to myself if this is a true story ;) ~Angie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2020 5:41:00 PM

oh how cute, I can't believe I never saw this or even congratulated it yet. Way to go, Joseph.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/3/2020 5:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win my friend. How cute is this verse - love it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2020 12:46:00 PM

A delightfully cute poem, Joseph. Love the visual, too. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/20/2020 6:12:00 PM

So smoothly and so softly it lands on the cat's nose. Lines with a great smooth flow, Joseph!! Congratulations on your top win!!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/20/2020 9:22:00 AM

This is so very cool, Joseph Pangie xx

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/19/2020 8:20:00 PM

Awe, such a sweet poem. Nope, the cat never knew. This is so cute and it belongs right here in my favorites. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) I love it. :) Brandy