Joseph May Poet Tetractys

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On the Nose

With 
 summer
  breeze gently 
 blowing, its blue 
  wings flutter, as it dances in the air
 trying to find the perfect landing spot
 the cat never
 knew it would 
 be its 
 nose!

 9-13-2020
 Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Sara Kendrick November 20, 2020 at 7:52 AM Creative use of the form and the topic matter. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Dropping by with congrats on your win. Sara

Akkina Downing November 10, 2020 at 6:34 AM So adorably cute :)

Jan Allison October 13, 2020 at 10:50 AM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Angela Crabtree October 5, 2020 at 5:26 PM How clever, Joseph. the bird landed on the cat's nose. I wonder to myself if this is a true story ;) ~Angie

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2020 at 5:41 PM oh how cute, I can't believe I never saw this or even congratulated it yet. Way to go, Joseph.

Jennifer Proxenos October 3, 2020 at 5:17 AM Congratulations on your top win my friend. How cute is this verse - love it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paul Callus September 22, 2020 at 12:46 PM A delightfully cute poem, Joseph. Love the visual, too. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul

Newton Ranaweera September 20, 2020 at 6:12 PM So smoothly and so softly it lands on the cat's nose. Lines with a great smooth flow, Joseph!! Congratulations on your top win!!

Panagiota Romios September 20, 2020 at 9:22 AM This is so very cool, Joseph Pangie xx

Brandy Nicole September 19, 2020 at 8:20 PM Awe, such a sweet poem. Nope, the cat never knew. This is so cute and it belongs right here in my favorites. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) I love it. :) Brandy

Paghunda Zahid September 18, 2020 at 1:21 PM Loves it. Congrats on your win

Carol Mitra September 17, 2020 at 10:05 PM Ha Ha...the Cat is fluttered....Congrats on your win Joseph:)

Eve Roper September 17, 2020 at 6:47 PM Lovely write, Joseph, a look of shock, just perfect .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..

Judy Ball September 15, 2020 at 2:32 PM Oh this is so sweet and the pic made it perfect. Just love this one. God Bless, JB

Jan Allison September 13, 2020 at 10:23 AM oh what a fun poem Joseph:-) so good to see you back on soup you have been missed:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2020 at 10:03 AM - Lovely written, Joseph :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 9:23 AM good one..Enjoyed reading it this morning. Sara

Vijay Pandit September 13, 2020 at 9:08 AM Beautifully done, Joseph. Your words match the photo perfectly. All the best.