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On the Moon

Turn to ash, then ride the tide --- You runaway to find a place to hide --- Then sadly you realize all too soon --- The only place left is on the Moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/12/2010 8:15:00 AM
I know I read this one already, lol i love poems when it comes to the moon.. I myself need a place to hide up in that moon. take care,..LeeAnn
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Date: 8/5/2010 12:09:00 PM
good write,hopefully i'll see you on the dark side of the moon
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Date: 7/25/2010 5:31:00 AM
The hiding place has a bit of a sad thought, but the moon is a lovely place to hide. Enjoyed your free verse,..p.d.
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Date: 5/23/2010 11:50:00 AM
Good imagery and it made me smile. Sometimes we just can't run away far enough.
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Date: 1/20/2010 6:48:00 AM
A beautiful write amigo many nights i love to ride with the top down just me the highway and the moon. A beautiful write cheers brother
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