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On the Long Straight Path

all flowers vanish when the long straight path takes a sudden twist March 19, 2021 for the 'Lets Get Creative With Haiku' Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/28/2021 10:28:00 PM

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Joseph May

Date: 3/25/2021 8:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea..

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/25/2021 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on you win! Panagiota You go, girl! ))

Constance La France

Date: 3/24/2021 3:14:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/24/2021 7:36:00 AM

Congrats Andrea! visual & literal twist at the end is delightful!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/23/2021 2:36:00 PM

Interesting layout that aptly follows the poems contents. Congratulations!

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/23/2021 1:03:00 PM

Hello Andrea, Your usual immaculate standard. Well done. A figure three haiku is a term I conceived of myself(I think)! It refers to the numerical layout of the words in my contest entry(I hope)! I tried to arrange my words in the form of the number 3. Thanks for your comments. Howard

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/23/2021 12:44:00 PM

My eyes have to dart around just to read ... the twist in the actual path must be quite sharp! Curious what the contest entailed...

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/23/2021 2:32:00 AM

I love the layout - it fits the narrative well :)) Congratulations on your top win, Andrea. ~Sus

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/22/2021 9:00:00 PM

pretty clever, Andrea ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/22/2021 7:23:00 PM

Your haiku's format and imagery are beautifully imagined, Andrea. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/22/2021 4:17:00 PM

Cleverly written, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2021 4:15:00 PM

excellent ink Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/22/2021 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your Haiku win; you really deserve it; best wishes, Las

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/22/2021 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2021 12:36:00 PM

- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, a creative twist Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/22/2021 11:37:00 AM

Hi Andrea, You did a good with the contest challenge. I found it to be well-written and creative. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2021 1:56:00 AM

I like how you typed this with a sudden twist. Good luck in the contest.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/21/2021 10:54:00 PM

Hello Andrea, A nice twist in the path. Love the vanished blooms in a heaven sent haiku. -Richard

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/21/2021 10:32:00 AM

Great idea for this contest Andrea. I loved how you used 'takes a sudden' and 'twist', in different lines... also 'when the long straight path' in one line..great imagery. I hope this will place high... I just miss writing for this interesting contest and other contests... I couldn't log in much to Soup....Hugs..~ Ani.