On the Line

Searching for the fountain of youth and the wisdom of time/ emotional intellect I combine the 
heart and the mind/I reside on the line between humbleness and pride/where hope and 
despair divide and force you to choose sides/
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 10:50 AM
enjoyed reading your work and thanks for the comments on my silliness.
Neels Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 10:57 AM
An interesting write, Michael. Enjoyed
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Very creative and interesting narrative on the,line, michael
Falotico Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Nice Rhyme Royal, very enjoyed today...
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