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On the Horizon

Sunset painting velvety sky at nighttide tones of red clouds shimmering above mountains trace the downward spiral of wafting sunset replaced with darkness Sandra Adams 09/24/2013

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/20/2013 6:33:00 AM

I love the imagery here Sandra simply lovely Shadow x smile

Skat A

Date: 10/1/2013 7:47:00 PM

lovely win Sandra............. LUV.............. SKAT

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2013 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Sandra a fine piece!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2013 6:44:00 PM

I must revisit the list and see what placement you took. For me it was standout. Congratulations, sweetie.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/28/2013 9:55:00 AM

You have painted the most wonderful picture in my head! Love this!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2013 7:26:00 AM

Great quality winning work..Enjoyed reading...Congrats.Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/28/2013 4:07:00 AM

Lovely and interesting piece,Sandra...Congrats on your win..And thanks for your lovely comments on my page...XOXO...

Jack Jordan

Date: 9/27/2013 8:48:00 PM

Very beautiful writing. I'm somewhat familiar with Sappho. I enjoyed the fragmented yet related nature of the writing. You've captured the essence of her poetry... Jack

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/27/2013 8:49:00 PM

I didn't realize your poem was a winner until I read PD's comment below. Congratulations... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2013 7:58:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your "SAPPHIC STANZA" winning poem.. :) always~~ Linda

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/27/2013 7:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win with this beauty, Sandra. Smooth, my friend, smooth. Well done. Licia :-)

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/25/2013 7:12:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Inked in beauty..I liked this one.. Ken

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2013 6:29:00 PM

thank you...hope your weekend rocks :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/25/2013 5:19:00 PM

painted words beautiful piece

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2013 6:29:00 PM

thank you liam...it was a challenge to write :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/25/2013 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2013 6:30:00 PM

thank you Richard...have a great weekend :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/25/2013 7:52:00 AM

A capture of an uplifting sunset....wonderful job!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2013 6:30:00 PM

thank you...been getting to see some unique sunrises each morning and I think they helped inspire me :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2013 12:07:00 AM

It's good to know I was not the only one that took a long time doing it!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2013 6:32:00 PM

lol...my time is so limited with getting up at 4 15 am for work that I almost didn't do this one because of the challenge...

Honestly J.T.

Date: 9/24/2013 11:28:00 PM

I really like this one. Good job

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2013 6:32:00 PM

thank you :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/24/2013 9:42:00 PM

You make it sound like there is a cosmic painter out there painting gorgeous scenes of nature. Stimulating work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2013 6:33:00 PM

thank you...perhaps its all the painted sunrises I have been seeing :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 4:26:00 PM

I forgot how the last line should be done. But it looks like you got the first ones metered correctly. I found this type of stanza very challenging! Yours is beautiful.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/24/2013 4:55:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...i thought it to be a real challenge too and had several different definitions of the form as well as several sample poems open as i wrote it and it still took me weeks to finish it..