William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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On the Good Ship Bubble-Pop

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On the Good Ship Bubble-Pop

Bubbles, see-throughs, delicate floats,
of voyaged sailless boats,
her captain gauge the air around,
blue cast where none e'er drown,
farther distance -- misspoke, rising,
shapeless bows devising,
now turned admiral, sees her fleet,
eyes rounded sterns complete,
some sway starboard, others go port,
she ventures drafts to sort,
she waits till all had left her view,
ere scuttling added crew,
lifts her makeshift pier container,
blows whistle, no-brainer,
toneless wizardry expresses,
anew fleet progresses,
dreams to be, part of the magic,
fit in spheres? a tough trick!

2021 September 23
*1st Place*
rhyme me rhyme me a poem
~~Eve Roper: Judged 2021 October 05

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Paula Goldsmith October 7, 2021 at 8:55 AM Congratulations on your win. What a magical story/write. Have a blessed day with your win............... William Kelii Kekaula October 7, 2021 at 9:58 AM Thank you, Paula, kind of you to say, and may your day be blessed as well, my friend, Aloha!

Jan Allison October 6, 2021 at 11:44 AM Absolutely charming and i love the title too William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula October 6, 2021 at 3:11 PM Words of good intents idle naught, for it, fairs a smile my friend, Aloha!

Krish Radhakrishna October 6, 2021 at 12:31 AM Great imagination and we can gloat away in one of the bubbles! congrats on your top win!! William Kelii Kekaula October 6, 2021 at 1:54 AM Thanks my friend from yond breaks! Peace and joy always, Aloha!

Eve Roper October 5, 2021 at 7:58 PM Congratulations on your win, William, great flow on a sea sail Bubble ship :). Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula October 5, 2021 at 11:26 PM Glad you've enjoyed it, Eve, I made it to be right up your alley my friend! Aloha!

Gary Radice September 29, 2021 at 3:27 AM A lovely poem William, enhanced by your reading. The Shirley Temple-esque title drew me in and I was captivated. I like how the poem is meant to be read almost in one breath; it gives a feeling of sharp movement to the ocean faring images and words. Cheers - Gary William Kelii Kekaula September 29, 2021 at 4:05 AM Your thorough insightfulness is truly appreciated, Gary, and that your closing statement clearly validifies its intents, my friend. Peace, Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose September 26, 2021 at 8:02 AM You weave magic with your words William, again, beautifully created have a great day dear poet. :) William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2021 at 9:42 AM A second of joy fulfills one's whole day, Vienna, and I have you to be grateful for it my friend! Own the joy, Aloha!