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On the golden pond

Love reigning eternal, golden pond shines,
The dusk sky is ablaze with hues, outshines,
The dawn descends upon the tranquil pond,
Water gleams like gold, a shimmering bond.

Thousand suns reflect, as the wind whistles,
Love reigning eternal, golden pond shines,
Concentric waves in circles, joy arranged,
Memories emerge, from the pond estranged.

Shadows lengthen, as daylight starts to swoon,
Reflections fracture, reunite, immune,
Love reigning eternal, golden pond shines,
Fond Memories of togetherness stays.

Sitting on shore, enraptured by the moon,
Hands entwined, vows made to last and cocoon,
Trees sway, birds sing, adoring our embrace,
Love reigning eternal, golden pond shines.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 25, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Very well-crafted quatrain, Jay. Your emotions are shining in this poem, good luck with the contest.
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