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On the Give and Take

Somebody fill me in on the give and take Please, somebody ... please, anybody Somebody tell me what is real and what is fake I wanna hear it from somebody I need to hear from anybody ... no copies I see walking mannequins nobodies I’m starting to shun everybody Somebody got a bad habit, for goodness sake They wanna keep theirs, and still eat my angel cake Just another silver spoon slice of give and take Another fork tongue bite mark of give and take Another knife to my life ... gangsta give and take For my labor, they wanna give me nothing Then take away my freedom of choice to make They wanna give me no mercy, and take away none of my mistakes Now I know why, I’m always so thirsty Somebody gave me a bottle squeezed empty taste of give and take They gave me a whole lot of chest misery, with their coffin cake funeral carryout take They sure gave me plenty of cemetery grief, when they took away my freedom to breathe This devil cake cremated bake was their last give and take

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Date: 7/26/2018 3:14:00 PM
Love it Freddie, glad I could add a bit of inspiration. Your words always transcend the page my poetic brother! Hugs Rick
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Date: 7/26/2018 1:18:00 PM
Brutal commentary Freddie, skillfully composed, well done my friend...
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Date: 7/26/2018 12:37:00 PM
what to say...a philosophical outpouring, science, math... life...time.... i prefer a non-contradiction?....
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Date: 7/26/2018 12:07:00 PM
Well done Freddie! It seems enough is enough with your poem. Hopefully more goodness will come about, more giving :)
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