On the Eighth Day

On the Eighth Day ……… Peter Onyancha

And on the Eighth day
He created Hell
He looked at it
And said, it was good

It was good for good
Good for them!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 24, 2020 at 8:46 AM
love the wit on this one, Peter; Good for them :)
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January 2, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Congrats Peter on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful piece to share with us all today with luv.. u can view it on the home pages ...enjoy..
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December 1, 2010 at 3:13 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Peter. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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