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On the Edges of Dreams

i stand on time's dunes tracing the edges of dreams your whispers softly falling on a breeze as the ocean seduces her sands through a climax of moans glistening beneath the moon my shadow full on thoughts of you

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Winged Warrior

Date: 10/15/2019 11:45:00 AM

Ouch!..." through a climax of moans"...someone got their toes stomped lol :o)...Love-ly write Sandra...^WW^

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 11:56:00 AM

lol...the ocean always moans beneath winds, and well um... thanks for the comment and the laugh....

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/15/2019 10:41:00 AM

My friend you gift us this sensual and hot-flaming piece that stirs romantic fever and induces fantasies that brings back memories of youth and some precious and loving midnight trysts! A hot jewel this one is! A fav, a beauty..

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 11:22:00 AM

Thank you my friend, i am honored that this found its way into your favorites...:) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2019 7:23:00 AM

Sigh...absolutely beautiful. There is a softness and a desire to your words that washes over me like the cool ripples of the evening tide coming in. So very nicely done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 9:52:00 AM

Thank you my friend, the moon appeared full...it was even out as the sun was rising, it inspired me...i appreciate you and all your kind comments :) hugs