Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

On the Edges of Dreams

i stand
on time's dunes
tracing the edges
of dreams

your whispers
softly falling
on a breeze
as the ocean
seduces
her sands
through a climax
of moans

glistening
beneath the moon
my shadow
full on thoughts
of you

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Winged Warrior October 15, 2019 at 11:45 AM Ouch!..." through a climax of moans"...someone got their toes stomped lol :o)...Love-ly write Sandra...^WW^ Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 11:56 AM lol...the ocean always moans beneath winds, and well um... thanks for the comment and the laugh....

Robert Lindley October 15, 2019 at 10:41 AM My friend you gift us this sensual and hot-flaming piece that stirs romantic fever and induces fantasies that brings back memories of youth and some precious and loving midnight trysts! A hot jewel this one is! A fav, a beauty.. Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 11:22 AM Thank you my friend, i am honored that this found its way into your favorites...:) hugs

Chris Green October 15, 2019 at 7:23 AM Sigh...absolutely beautiful. There is a softness and a desire to your words that washes over me like the cool ripples of the evening tide coming in. So very nicely done. Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 9:52 AM Thank you my friend, the moon appeared full...it was even out as the sun was rising, it inspired me...i appreciate you and all your kind comments :) hugs

Vijay Pandit October 15, 2019 at 6:57 AM Expressive, romantic, moonlit! Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 9:50 AM Thank you Vijay, the moon was beautiful...an inspiration for sure... :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2019 at 3:37 AM - Romantic dreams ... beautifully written, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you so much Anne-Lise....a romantic moon enticed my muse... hugs :)

Arturo Michael October 15, 2019 at 1:42 AM I like the way you expressed yourself..."my shadow full on thoughts of you" Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you so much Arturo...full moon thoughts, tangled in the muse :) hugs

Hello There October 14, 2019 at 10:13 PM Of course, I agree with Line... I mean, really now... the ocean seducing her sands? Think I'll take a dip in the cool waters after that one ;) Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 9:48 AM lol...well you know, there's just something romantic about a full moon especially over the ocean... hugs :)

Line Gauthier October 14, 2019 at 10:00 PM Sandra, you nail these sensuous poems. Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 9:47 AM Thank you so much Line...it appeared as the moon was full last night...i guess it stirred my muse :)