On the Edge of a Wintery Night

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Written on October 16, 2024

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Falling, falling, falling
Always calling – softly, breathless,
On wings of flakes, so quiet,
Silence drifting, hallucinating,
Dreaming of the moments,
When heartfelt prayers are answered…

Falling, falling, falling,
Drifting in from the winds,
Soothing away the trembling ache,
Broken whispers of light,
Blessing away the darkest fates,
Alive, like the stars who ache…

Falling, falling, falling,
Always sure of the spirit’s wonder,
Arising, like the mists, winsome,
Blessing the truth who aspires
To color the heart in a moment,
When light fades, as the story worries
By pens of hope, pens of grace…

Falling, falling, falling,
Drifting through the maze,
A gentle music, playing
On the seas of white, tender
Like the music, playing,
Softest songs, peace all along…

Falling, falling, falling,
Snow like feathery wisps,
Seeking to shadow the hills,
Blessing the spirits,
Soothing the glitter of a sky
Promising the stars to decide….

Falling, falling, falling,
Remembering the promises,
An aching wind, glorious
Prayers prayed by hearts
Who see through the melancholy,
To the light, the forever silence…

Falling, falling, falling,
My heart soars through the skies,
On winds of blessings, wings
So alive, like the softest moonlight,
Pouring over the mountains,
In hues of sacrifice, words blowing…

Falling, falling, falling,
Stars tremble in the twilight,
Beautiful moments, fiercest words
Remembering the mornings,
When the innocent white glistens
Through the heart, through the silence…

Falling, falling, falling,
In wistful thoughts,
While spirits decide the fates,
Wonderlands, in hesitant praise,
Wishing, wishing, wishing,
Songs are written, stories fade…

Falling, falling, falling,
Descending, through the light,
Making their way, fates
Hesitant, like the praise, falling
From lips who can’t truly say,
Just how amazing His love, so I pray…

Praising, praising, praising,
As the night keeps awake,
By the flood of a heart who knows Him,
As loving Father, the way, the grace,
That is everlasting, like this praise,
 Falling, falling, falling…

Everlasting, as is His heaven,
As is His love,
As is the wonder from God above!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/16/2024 10:09:00 AM
Your poem conveys a deeply spiritual experience, where the imagery of falling snow becomes a powerful symbol of your connection to divine grace. The soft, repetitive rhythm evokes a sense of peace and continuity, while the contrast between moments of vulnerability and faith illustrates your journey toward spiritual understanding and comfort. The poem gently intertwines nature with spiritual reflection, offering a soothing reminder of the presence of divine love in every aspect of life.
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