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On the Edge of a Dream

Your silhouette caught in the sun
Our lip’s first time at tasting bliss
This prelude to a winter’s fall
New hearts now closer than a kiss
On the edge of a dream undone

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Heather Ober

January 9, 2013 at 8:54 AM

Congratulations! So cool that you were able to include each of Andrea's catch phrases in your poem. Very well done :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 9, 2013 at 1:57 AM

Belated congratulations on your winning spot Michael xx

Debbie Guzzi

January 8, 2013 at 6:17 PM

Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

Michael F Lewis

January 8, 2013 at 9:38 PM

Thank yo very much Debbie!

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2013 at 5:46 PM

So YOU are the mystery guy. I blogged about you at my blog a few days ago when I announced my winners. I was not able to locate the author of this poem by typing in its title. Now that I got my winners list to come up, I can see who you are. You won third place in my contest with this terrific poem. What I thought best about it: the way you managed to show every one of my five "catch phrases" in each line. BIG congrats.

Michael F Lewis

January 8, 2013 at 9:37 PM

I am always a mystery.....yeah right! Thank you Andrea! I don't really know how to use this site fully yet, like for example...I didn't know there were blogs! Ha! Oh well!