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On the Edge of a Dream

Your silhouette caught in the sun Our lip’s first time at tasting bliss This prelude to a winter’s fall New hearts now closer than a kiss On the edge of a dream undone

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Heather Ober

Date: 1/9/2013 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations! So cool that you were able to include each of Andrea's catch phrases in your poem. Very well done :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:57:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your winning spot Michael xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2013 6:17:00 PM

Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

Michael F Lewis
Date: 1/8/2013 9:38:00 PM

Thank yo very much Debbie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2013 5:46:00 PM

So YOU are the mystery guy. I blogged about you at my blog a few days ago when I announced my winners. I was not able to locate the author of this poem by typing in its title. Now that I got my winners list to come up, I can see who you are. You won third place in my contest with this terrific poem. What I thought best about it: the way you managed to show every one of my five "catch phrases" in each line. BIG congrats.

Michael F Lewis
Date: 1/8/2013 9:37:00 PM

I am always a mystery.....yeah right! Thank you Andrea! I don't really know how to use this site fully yet, like for example...I didn't know there were blogs! Ha! Oh well!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2012 7:47:00 AM

A beautifully written poem Michael. - HAPPY NEW YEAR!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Michael F Lewis
Date: 1/8/2013 9:37:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise!