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On the Edge of a Dream

I laid me down in peace and slept And found with pure unfeigned surprise A land of bliss before my eyes; Then from my eyes this vision swept So there I lay and softly wept

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Date: 2/2/2013 2:10:00 PM
How beautiful to dream.Whenever im sad i dream myself away and am happy again..If you wake up to find yourself weeping..Close your eyelids and travel again to that wonderful land..Maybe then you can write another poem and share what you saw there on the land of bliss¿¿°
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Date: 1/9/2013 11:42:00 AM
So soft, sad and lovely....again, so eloquent! :)
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Date: 1/9/2013 1:56:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your winning spot Isaiah xx
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:48:00 PM
this is beautiful and very deserving of your win. congratulations!
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:15:00 PM
Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love
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Date: 1/7/2013 6:05:00 PM
Big congratulations on your worthy third place win in my contest. the contest page will not post, but I am locating all my first through third place winners to wish them congrats. This one was beautiful.
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Date: 1/1/2013 12:34:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this today Isaiah, all The best Joe..)
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Date: 12/25/2012 10:13:00 AM
This is a new form for me and reminds me of the name--chinchilla...hahah...powerful yet soft emotion in this dream state! Thanks for visiting my last wk too...a very very VERY Merry Christmas! gwendolen
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