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On the Crest of a Wave

When sorrow comes riding on the crest of a wave It hurts you, converts you Into someone broken, bruised, brittle and not brave When passion comes riding on the crest of a wave It drowns you and crowns you With a cryptic caress, and a crazed heart that craves When delight comes riding on the crest of a wave It thrills you and fills you With sanguine satisfaction, soul sadness to stave When fury comes riding on the crest of a wave It blinds you and finds you A brazen brochure on how to badly behave When kindness comes riding on the crest of a wave It mends you and sends you On a smooth streetway that steers your self and does save When terror comes riding on the crest of a wave It bites you and smites you With a gruesome greeting that's grievous, gruff and grave When comfort comes riding on the crest of a wave It cures you, assures you Of a freedom from fear and a Friend who forgave

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Date: 9/26/2023 4:22:00 AM
Superb piece, Joanna:-) I enjoyed it tremendously. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 8/29/2023 9:42:00 AM
"When kindness comes riding on the crest of a wave/ It mends you and sends you/ On a smooth streetway that steers your self and does save/" So rightly expressed....! Beautiful poem, Joanna. Most of our feelings come riding to us even without our knowledge.
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Date: 8/17/2023 11:37:00 AM
Great poem. I love the last stanza :)
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Date: 8/16/2023 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I can relate to each feeling riding on the crest of a wave.
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Date: 8/16/2023 9:02:00 AM
In sorrow we learn, we yearn to be healed... in adversity we find strength... your poem flows so well and rhymes great... deep poetry... Hope you are well..
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