On the Crest of a Wave

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                          August 16, 2023

On an early morning walk along the shore
I pondered thoughts about the ocean floor
What treasures are buried beneath its sands
Amid corals, anemones, orange sea fans
I wanted a key to unlock the seabed's door 

On the crest of a wave, what had been carried
bobbled and lobbed, back and forth parried
from shore and blown across windswept seas
Miles traveled by storms or a tropical breeze
on ocean currents, their journey never tarried

In a shallow tidal pool, a conch was stranded
A gift from Poseidon's hand, I'd been handed
I held the shell to my ear and then listened
awed by the sound while the sun glistened
Waves crested until on the beach they landed

With perfect rhythmic cadence they swelled
on a high tide until its last ripples were felled
Another always followed, close upon its wake
constantly flowing as if it had a thirst to slake
quenched by rushing ashore as if compelled

Buoyantly, bottles drift on the crest of a wave
Directed by the whims of tides, as if a slave
No ebbing waters have ever ferried one to me
I ponder how many notes drowned in the sea,
bottles speared by Neptune. Forsooth, a knave!

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Date: 9/25/2023 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this magnificent poem, Lin:-) Bravo!
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Date: 8/16/2023 10:26:00 AM
Nice poem with the relaxing music of waves. Waves bring cowries, conch shell and many other treasures. GL in contest,
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/16/2023 10:42:00 AM
Thanks so much for the thoughts, Jay. I've always wanted to clear a spot on the ocean floor and see what is there. Not being able to part the waters of any sea... not possible.
Date: 8/16/2023 8:47:00 AM
Such a relaxing place to be Lin, beside the waves listening to the sweet sounds of the ocean. Good luck in the contest and non voyage. Tom
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Date: 8/16/2023 9:18:00 AM
Hey Tom and thanks for feeling the ambiance of my poem. Join me and listen to the rush of the waves. We'll just have to be aware of the seagulls.
Date: 8/16/2023 8:07:00 AM
I feel honoured that you should fave my poems. I have always stood in awe of your poetry. This one sent me on the crest of a mighty wave. Great visuals of poetic beauty.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/16/2023 8:14:00 AM
Victor, we have mutual respect for our poetry and each other. I appreciate you letting me know your kind thoughts. Faving your poetry is my pleasure.
Date: 8/16/2023 6:38:00 AM
Another beautiful Lin poem…..l love poems about the ocean and you did it proud with this one! Lovely….Debx
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Date: 8/16/2023 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb. The ocean, celestial bodies, aren't they just ripe for writing about them? I love them, too.
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