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On the Cocoon

on the cocoon
the butterfly unfurls
a baby loon cries

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Susan Gentry

December 23, 2015 at 6:31 AM

Congrats!

Curtis Johnson

December 19, 2015 at 10:30 AM

Good work Charles. Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 18, 2015 at 10:32 PM

Precisely beautiful Charles.. well thats the beauty of a haiku.. few words n much said.. big congrats on ur big win!

James Inman

December 18, 2015 at 9:30 PM

Very nice write Charles, love the cut.

Dan Cwiak

December 18, 2015 at 6:17 PM

Great Haiku, Charles. Congrats on your win.

Joe Maverick

December 18, 2015 at 2:27 PM

Congrats on the high spot here Charles with a good piece indeed.'

Richard Lamoureux

December 18, 2015 at 10:03 AM

Beautiful Haiku! Congrats. This for me is the most difficult form, I admire people like you who are so good at it.

Poet Destroyer A

December 18, 2015 at 1:26 AM

Well done Charles, Happy Holidays. LINDA

Viv Wigley

December 18, 2015 at 12:10 AM

Nice to see a Haiku in with the topsters, Charles, well done. Regards, Viv

Skat A

December 17, 2015 at 7:14 PM

ps... WOW, thank you, Charles, now I see why this haiku placed high. SKAT

Skat A

December 17, 2015 at 7:12 PM

Hello Charles, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT