On the Brink

She sneaks next door
when he's asleep,
forgetting the vows
she promised to keep.

She's young and pretty,
on overdrive,
the guy next door,
he's so alive.

The one at home,
he's a good guy,
her parents love him,
and cringe at her lies.

She needs more
than he can give,
needs the passion
just to live.

So now she's in
her lover's arms,
how can something so good
cause so much harm?

And all we can do
is hold our breath,
we know her marriage's
on the brink of death.

Oh, lust-driven youth,
we remember it well,
and know the destruction
it often foretells.

Remorse is a burden
that weighs down a soul,
and we wish we could save her
from this torturous hole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ingle Avatar
December 26, 2008 at 2:20 PM
Sounds like someone's foolin' around...Remember that song....who's makin' loveto your ol' lady, while you were out makin' love..I can't remember who sung that..it may have been Persey Sledge...I wish I could go back to those younger days, the good old days....That's a great poem, and so very much true...Any way I was just kidding about my roach poem...I was just hoping to get someone to laugh..I think up some of the weirdest stuff sometimes just to make "me" laugh...Happy New Year.L....in Lou.
Fawcett Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 4:22 PM
Great write Danielle, and kind of topical regarding my blog on Jealousy LOL. Thank you from my heart for all your kind comments and support, and for always putting a smile on my face. Sorry about all the headaches!! Love, Nigel
Baker Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 6:31 PM
Sounds very realistic.
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