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On the Brink

She sneaks next door when he's asleep, forgetting the vows she promised to keep. She's young and pretty, on overdrive, the guy next door, he's so alive. The one at home, he's a good guy, her parents love him, and cringe at her lies. She needs more than he can give, needs the passion just to live. So now she's in her lover's arms, how can something so good cause so much harm? And all we can do is hold our breath, we know her marriage's on the brink of death. Oh, lust-driven youth, we remember it well, and know the destruction it often foretells. Remorse is a burden that weighs down a soul, and we wish we could save her from this torturous hole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/26/2008 2:20:00 PM
Sounds like someone's foolin' around...Remember that song....who's makin' loveto your ol' lady, while you were out makin' love..I can't remember who sung that..it may have been Persey Sledge...I wish I could go back to those younger days, the good old days....That's a great poem, and so very much true...Any way I was just kidding about my roach poem...I was just hoping to get someone to laugh..I think up some of the weirdest stuff sometimes just to make "me" laugh...Happy New Year.L....in Lou.
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:22:00 PM
Great write Danielle, and kind of topical regarding my blog on Jealousy LOL. Thank you from my heart for all your kind comments and support, and for always putting a smile on my face. Sorry about all the headaches!! Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/17/2008 6:31:00 PM
Sounds very realistic.
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