On the Beach

That will
I swear
Be me,
 On the 
Beach
In a bikini
At ninety three.

Tan
Roasted
Golden brown
Ignoring 
While 
Soaring
Those 
Judgmental 
Harsh frowns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/24/2009 5:04:00 PM
I love becuse its short and sweet I dislike long poems!!!!!!!! I thought it is funny too...the thought of you in a bikinni, maybe at ninety two!! Miranda
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Date: 2/24/2009 5:29:00 AM
Bikini.. anytime anywhere, any age-- oh.. did I say that?
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Date: 2/23/2009 5:40:00 AM
Catherine, nice poem, on line 7 did you mean ninety it's a common error, it happens to me all the time. To answer your question Poetrysoup is a great place to be. I am glad I found it, I also hope you enjoy your stay. It's really a fun place. If you have any questions feel free to ask...Raul
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Date: 2/16/2009 8:19:00 AM
Catherine - you go girl - bikini and beach go together like ham and eggs - God Bless, MJ
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