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On the Back of Atlas



“On the Back of Atlas”

On the back of Atlas my whole world sat
as if seated upon the golden thoughts 
of a fast loose dominant god all seeing
the Sky, eyes of cobalt blue 
marbled with stone cold clouds.

the Heart - 
the Ark of the Covenant
well-hidden,

keeps its fresh green secrets;

On the back of Atlas my whole world sat
as if seated upon the golden thoughts 
of a fast loose dominant god all seeing
the Sky, eyes of cobalt blue 
marbled with stone cold clouds.

“Orion walked on water too”, 

echoes in the mind of the Tenth Muse,
what matters little 
mostly survived in fragmentry form, 

is now lost;

On the back of Atlas my whole world sat
as if seated upon the golden thoughts
of a fast loose dominant god all seeing
the Sky, eyes of cobalt blue
marbled with stone cold clouds

took me over, 
spoke It’s lot,

“as above, 
it must be below” -

the Sky, eyes of cobalt blue 
marbled with stone cold clouds,
spoke to what is seated inside
for all it was worth,

“the Heart - 
the Ark of the Covenant
well-hidden,

keeps its secrets -

there lies Truth
where Truth lies sleeping”


Candide Diderot. ‘25




“As Dawn rose up in her golden robe from Ocean's tides,
bringing light to immortal gods and mortal men,
Thetis sped Hephaestus' gifts to the ships.” 
The Iliad/Homer (Book 19)

'Hear me, all you gods and all goddesses too,
as I proclaim what's brooding deep inside me.
Today the goddess of birth pangs and labor
will bring to light a human child, a man-child
born of the stock of men who spring from my blood,
one who will lord it over all who dwell around him.'
But teeming with treachery noble Hera set her trap,
'You will prove a liar . . .
when the time arrives to crown your words with action.
Come now, my Olympian, swear your inviolate oath
that he shall lord it over all who dwell around him—
that child who drops between a woman's knees today,
born of the stock of men who spring from Zeus's blood.' 
The Iliad/Homer (Book 19)
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Derden Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Your poem is a mythic meditation—rich with celestial imagery and philosophical depth. It echoes with timeless grandeur and poetic mystery. Keep channeling that which is epic; your voice is priceless!
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September 22, 2025 at 5:11 PM
Thank you.
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September 20, 2025 at 6:04 PM
The Iliad (Book 19)/Homer
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September 20, 2025 at 6:04 PM
https://home.ubalt.edu/ntygfit/ai_01_pursuing_fame/ai_01_tell/iliad19.htm
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September 20, 2025 at 6:02 PM
The Tenth Muse
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September 20, 2025 at 6:05 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sappho
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September 20, 2025 at 6:02 PM
Orion
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September 20, 2025 at 6:06 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Orion_(mythology)
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September 20, 2025 at 6:02 PM
Atlas
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September 20, 2025 at 6:07 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atlas_(mythology)
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September 20, 2025 at 6:02 PM
3iAtlas
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September 20, 2025 at 6:08 PM
“Comet 3I/ATLAS does not come from a single star constellation; it originated in interstellar space, likely from the Milky Way’s thick disk, a region of older stars distinct from our solar system's thin disk. While first observed in the direction of the constellation Sagittarius, its hyperbolic trajectory indicates it is not gravitationally bound to our sun and comes from another star system far beyond our own.”
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September 20, 2025 at 6:08 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/3I/ATLAS
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September 20, 2025 at 6:08 PM
https://thedebrief.org/nasa-official-issues-statement-on-3i-atlas-as-images-reveal-the-interstellar-object-has-grown-a-striking-new-feature/
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September 20, 2025 at 6:01 PM
3iAtlas (Conspiracy).
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September 20, 2025 at 6:13 PM
“The 3I/ATLAS "conspiracy" refers to Harvard scientist Avi Loeb's theory that the interstellar object 3I/ATLAS is not a natural comet but a potential alien technology or probe, a claim the scientific community generally rejects. Loeb cites the object's unusual, non-tail-like glow, unlikely trajectory, and lack of detected gases as potential signs of artificial origin, suggesting it could be a nuclear-powered spacecraft observing humanity. His controversial ideas, which mirror similar past claims about 'Oumuamua, have generated debate on interpreting scientific data but are not widely supported by evidence of extraterrestrial activity, according to experts.”
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September 20, 2025 at 6:12 PM
"Arvi Loab, Harvard Professor Unpacks The Mystery Of Alien Ship" | GRAVITAS
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September 20, 2025 at 6:12 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rcmCEYOrtQg
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September 20, 2025 at 6:12 PM
"Avi Loeb: ‘It’s a possibility’ 3I/ATLAS comet is alien ship"/ (Fox32 Chicago)
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September 20, 2025 at 6:12 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0GU3RqRMzQ
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September 20, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Philip Glass - Orion 1. Australia
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September 20, 2025 at 6:03 PM
https://youtu.be/O1qEexSJlUU?si=Lan9uxPVbR_qw__g
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